Texas Dream Catcher
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "CHAPTER CUATRO, PART DOS"Drug & human trafficking, can romance win?
50 total reviews
Comment from CHIGYSISKI
I HAVEN'T READ FROM THE BEGINNING BUT I WAS STILL ABLE TO CATCH THE DRIFT.THIS IS A NICELY-WRITTEN STORY WITH AN INTRIGUING PLOT. I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE. DID NOT NOTICE ANY ERRORS. WELL DONE!!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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I HAVEN'T READ FROM THE BEGINNING BUT I WAS STILL ABLE TO CATCH THE DRIFT.THIS IS A NICELY-WRITTEN STORY WITH AN INTRIGUING PLOT. I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE. DID NOT NOTICE ANY ERRORS. WELL DONE!!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Sorry for the late reply. School has started and my time for FS is extremely tight. I do appreciate your review and the time it took to read.
Comment from lalajovanoski
I can see the outflow of deep emotion from the heart in this work. An emotion depicting a betrayal of love and trust. Yes, it'd happens and it will continue to happen inasmuch as man's heart construction is not written on his face. Nicely rendered. Exquisitely composed. Love LJ
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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I can see the outflow of deep emotion from the heart in this work. An emotion depicting a betrayal of love and trust. Yes, it'd happens and it will continue to happen inasmuch as man's heart construction is not written on his face. Nicely rendered. Exquisitely composed. Love LJ
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Sorry for the late reply. School has started and my time for FS is extremely tight. I do appreciate your review and the time it took to read.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hi Barbara,
The end-of-summer-back-to-work feeling is awful, isn't it?
You have a great title for your new book - I just noticed it!
Another good chapter. A fine marriage of drama and potential romance. Look forward to more. Happy first day at school!
Sonali
idea what to do with the (S)uburban. We'll discuss it later
As Soni said that, the two cowboys carried Jim .. suggest: .. While Soni was speaking, the two cowboys ...
When Kuruk arrived, Soni kissed his che(e)k. "
know it's a tight fit(,) but I feel Grandfather needs
the desk to the large ranch's wall map.... suggest: ... to the wall map of the large ranch.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Hi Barbara,
The end-of-summer-back-to-work feeling is awful, isn't it?
You have a great title for your new book - I just noticed it!
Another good chapter. A fine marriage of drama and potential romance. Look forward to more. Happy first day at school!
Sonali
idea what to do with the (S)uburban. We'll discuss it later
As Soni said that, the two cowboys carried Jim .. suggest: .. While Soni was speaking, the two cowboys ...
When Kuruk arrived, Soni kissed his che(e)k. "
know it's a tight fit(,) but I feel Grandfather needs
the desk to the large ranch's wall map.... suggest: ... to the wall map of the large ranch.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Sorry for the late reply. School has started and my time for FS is extremely tight. I do appreciate your review and the time it took to read. I thought I had already corrected those. I'd better make sure I saved them.
Comment from Sasha
I am the worst editor on this site, so you won't be surprised when I say, I didn't find anything wrong or that needed changing. The story is moving along quite nicely and you have my full interest in what will happen next. Keep up the great work.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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I am the worst editor on this site, so you won't be surprised when I say, I didn't find anything wrong or that needed changing. The story is moving along quite nicely and you have my full interest in what will happen next. Keep up the great work.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Sorry for the late reply. School has started and my time for FS is extremely tight. I do appreciate your review and the time it took to read.
Comment from Loren (7)
Like the way you included the closing paragraph of the preceding chapter as it helps the lead in. A short synopsis in italics might help as well as character list under author's notes. Other than that, I found this to be like a contemporary story behind the headlines. It sounds very authentic and dialogue natural. Good job, and I'll continue to read. Loren
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Like the way you included the closing paragraph of the preceding chapter as it helps the lead in. A short synopsis in italics might help as well as character list under author's notes. Other than that, I found this to be like a contemporary story behind the headlines. It sounds very authentic and dialogue natural. Good job, and I'll continue to read. Loren
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Sorry for the late reply. School has started and my time for FS is extremely tight. I do appreciate your review and the time it took to read.
Comment from deepwater
They look like they're security measures. Is this because of that Hughes guy?"
Soni's eyes met Ben's. "They are security measures, but they may be for a different reason."
nice job keep writing
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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They look like they're security measures. Is this because of that Hughes guy?"
Soni's eyes met Ben's. "They are security measures, but they may be for a different reason."
nice job keep writing
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Sorry for the late reply. School has started and my time for FS is extremely tight. I do appreciate your review and the time it took to read.
Comment from Genya
Another brilliant chapter. The plot thickens and I just wanted to read on to see what was going to happen next. This is a really good story and I so look forward to reading it. Found one mistake I think....closed his eyes and puckered his lips. I guess you he took another. Not sure if something was missing here. Loved it and love the characters. Genya
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Another brilliant chapter. The plot thickens and I just wanted to read on to see what was going to happen next. This is a really good story and I so look forward to reading it. Found one mistake I think....closed his eyes and puckered his lips. I guess you he took another. Not sure if something was missing here. Loved it and love the characters. Genya
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Sorry for the late reply. School has started and my time for FS is extremely tight. I do appreciate your review and the time it took to read.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Thanks for the pleasure of another enjoyable chapter that sets up your story for numerous possibilities for coming conflicts. Great chapter. :-)
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thanks for the pleasure of another enjoyable chapter that sets up your story for numerous possibilities for coming conflicts. Great chapter. :-)
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Sorry for the late reply. School has started and my time for FS is extremely tight. I do appreciate your review and the time it took to read.
Comment from angelface2
Nice chapter, Barbara. I hope they find out about the drug trafficking and can stop it. Didn't find any spag, I don't think. Nice writing. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Nice chapter, Barbara. I hope they find out about the drug trafficking and can stop it. Didn't find any spag, I don't think. Nice writing. Miss Sally
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Sorry for the late reply. School has started and my time for FS is extremely tight. I do appreciate your review and the time it took to read.
Comment from Cumbrianlass
The mystery continues to build around Jim, the ambush, and the Homeland Security's sudden interest in the reserve. Solid post, Barbara - flowed well. Can't say I spotted any spag - I was too well rooted in the story anyway!
Good post.
Av
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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The mystery continues to build around Jim, the ambush, and the Homeland Security's sudden interest in the reserve. Solid post, Barbara - flowed well. Can't say I spotted any spag - I was too well rooted in the story anyway!
Good post.
Av
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Sorry for the late reply. School has started and my time for FS is extremely tight. I do appreciate your review and the time it took to read.
