Jana - The Prostitute
A character of a book comes to life.17 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was excellent, Kay! I only hope our characters don't come back! Where did this one come from? I was really with him, but I had a funny thought that Jana was going to end up in Glen's grandmother's body!! I like your ending, everyone is happy! Good luck in the contest! It was a hard one to turn that picture into a story! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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That was excellent, Kay! I only hope our characters don't come back! Where did this one come from? I was really with him, but I had a funny thought that Jana was going to end up in Glen's grandmother's body!! I like your ending, everyone is happy! Good luck in the contest! It was a hard one to turn that picture into a story! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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Hello Happy Seagull, Thanks for reading; this came from my mind after I searched the horrible art work...Yuk! I enjoyed writing it. Love, Kay.
Comment from mumsyone
Fantastic story, Kay! In my opinion, this is what you should be writing. I can't give it six stars because it does need some editing, but I wish you all the best in the contest. I think this definitely has a chance!
Hugs,
Lois
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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Fantastic story, Kay! In my opinion, this is what you should be writing. I can't give it six stars because it does need some editing, but I wish you all the best in the contest. I think this definitely has a chance!
Hugs,
Lois
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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Hello Luverly Lois, Thanks so much - adewpearl had edited it and now I will follow suite. Love, K.
Comment from Eigle Rull
Unfortunately, I am out of six stars or you would have one for this great story. It is interesting. It held my attention well. It had a great storyline and the dialog was fantastic. It was intriguing, and I enjoyed reading it. It was perfect, my friend.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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Unfortunately, I am out of six stars or you would have one for this great story. It is interesting. It held my attention well. It had a great storyline and the dialog was fantastic. It was intriguing, and I enjoyed reading it. It was perfect, my friend.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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Hello Eigle, Thanks so much for reading; dreadful artwork, still, I enjoyed writing around it. Love, K.
Comment from Lovinia
Hi Kay
A fabulous story for the contest. You held the momentum throughout which created the tension of the 'spirit world' inclusion in real life. Your character Jana works well to incorporate the look and tone of the image. Love grandma ... she's cool. lol ..... she sure made fast work of that little demonic spirit. Even your fictitious character, Razor played his part and held presence, great choice of name which says so much about he character. I enjoyed how you began with the ending of the book, and of course finished with the new ending. Nice for Jana to end up well. :) I enjoyed your short story and wish you the best of luck in the contest. Well done. Hugs - Lovi xxo
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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Hi Kay
A fabulous story for the contest. You held the momentum throughout which created the tension of the 'spirit world' inclusion in real life. Your character Jana works well to incorporate the look and tone of the image. Love grandma ... she's cool. lol ..... she sure made fast work of that little demonic spirit. Even your fictitious character, Razor played his part and held presence, great choice of name which says so much about he character. I enjoyed how you began with the ending of the book, and of course finished with the new ending. Nice for Jana to end up well. :) I enjoyed your short story and wish you the best of luck in the contest. Well done. Hugs - Lovi xxo
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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Hello Lovi, Nice to hear from you. Glad you enjoyed. The painting was the pits and so it was a challenge. I enjoyed writing it. New email kay.steward@yahoo.com.au - Love, Kay. XX
Comment from Pyrrho
You touched upon two mental phenomena that only writers can understand, and not many of them.
1) A writer is God to his/her characters and can expose them to anything and kill them at will.
2) Some characters can take a writer over and write their own futures.
Such is reality.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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You touched upon two mental phenomena that only writers can understand, and not many of them.
1) A writer is God to his/her characters and can expose them to anything and kill them at will.
2) Some characters can take a writer over and write their own futures.
Such is reality.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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Pyrrho. Thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed. Cheers, Kay.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, aussie, I enjoyed this story about the character that didn't want to die and forced the man to give her new life. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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this is very well written, aussie, I enjoyed this story about the character that didn't want to die and forced the man to give her new life. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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Bless you my friend - I enjoyed writing it. :-) Kay XX
Comment from kristo81
One of the world's oldest professions, prostitutes are seldome judged as people worthy of consideration as human beings. But they undoubtedly all hope to have a good ending or a chance of a better life. Good story well told
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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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One of the world's oldest professions, prostitutes are seldome judged as people worthy of consideration as human beings. But they undoubtedly all hope to have a good ending or a chance of a better life. Good story well told
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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Thank you kristo81 - glad you enjoyed the story. Cheers, Kay.
