Her Last Mistake
a tale of murderous revenge16 total reviews
Comment from OLA THOMAS
This is really dark and strong like a horror film you ran it. Good imagination and instinct with this work, but I hate violence. Good luck.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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This is really dark and strong like a horror film you ran it. Good imagination and instinct with this work, but I hate violence. Good luck.
ola thomas
Comment Written 16-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Ola, I hate violence, too. That's why I was so hesitant to write, much less submit, this one. I am pleased you found it imaginative. Thanks for sharing.
Comment from skye
I hated every word of this excellent poem, because of the reality that oozed out of the lines.
These incidents, this type of emotion, are difficult to read, and when a writer has the gift of poetry, it comes alive a little too well.
Very well done.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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I hated every word of this excellent poem, because of the reality that oozed out of the lines.
These incidents, this type of emotion, are difficult to read, and when a writer has the gift of poetry, it comes alive a little too well.
Very well done.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Skye, I truly know how you feel. I was hesitant to write, much less submit, this poem because it's not a genre I enjoy. I am pleased, however, it "came alive" for you. Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment from lakeport
Her last mistake, indeed that's a very dramatic and bloody
story poem, very nice rhyming. Good luck at the contest,God bless you,lakeport.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Her last mistake, indeed that's a very dramatic and bloody
story poem, very nice rhyming. Good luck at the contest,God bless you,lakeport.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Thank you, lakeport, for your very kind praise and best wishes.
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your welcome,
could you please review my poem "Gift of Love"
thank you.lakeport.
Comment from drivenbackward
Not sure of the author, but this is very well written. In fact, I think it has a good shot at winning this contest. You might not write this type of material often, but do it well. Excellent.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Not sure of the author, but this is very well written. In fact, I think it has a good shot at winning this contest. You might not write this type of material often, but do it well. Excellent.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Thank you for your most encouraging review and kind praise.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this quatrain poem about the ex that slashed the woman's work and her body as he felt anger at her betrayal. I wish you the best ofl uck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this quatrain poem about the ex that slashed the woman's work and her body as he felt anger at her betrayal. I wish you the best ofl uck in the contest.
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Comment Written 16-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much for your very kind review and best wishes.
Comment from lalajovanoski
Extremely well written piece. I was able to easily relate to the message the author is executing. I really enjoyed reading it. Very relatable. Well done!
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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Extremely well written piece. I was able to easily relate to the message the author is executing. I really enjoyed reading it. Very relatable. Well done!
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Comment Written 16-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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I am delighted you enjoyed this tale of murder. Thank you so much for sharing.
