Heartbreak
The distance between realization and it sinking in.3 total reviews
Comment from lakeport
Heartbrake, indeed that's a very nice expressed Haiku poem,
Good luck at the contest, thanks for sharing it. God bless you.lakeport.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Heartbrake, indeed that's a very nice expressed Haiku poem,
Good luck at the contest, thanks for sharing it. God bless you.lakeport.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Thanks.
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your welcome,lakeport.
Comment from onebrit
Good luck with the contest. This small poem certainly summed up the time lag that often occurs in life. It is often the slow, small indifferences that spell death.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Good luck with the contest. This small poem certainly summed up the time lag that often occurs in life. It is often the slow, small indifferences that spell death.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Thanks for the "good luck."
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is excellent, amell, great imagery that provides for thought in this short poem, I enjoyed reading this one and wish you the best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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this is excellent, amell, great imagery that provides for thought in this short poem, I enjoyed reading this one and wish you the best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much.
