Grand Operating Design
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Comment from Kingsland
The beginning of this article was boring and overwritten with a lot of dribble that most don't give a hoot about in their existence. It took the last few paragraphs to ignite me into this piece of writing. The beginning was nothing more than a boring speech you may hear in a class given in some university on the subject of man and his relationship to himself in the technological era of theology. Which in of itself is neither here nor there. But then there is the last few paragraphs to consider in this piece of writing which are driven along brilliant lines of thoughts. So over all, this was a well written article that starts out poorly and ends up in a brilliant piece of thinking... John
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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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The beginning of this article was boring and overwritten with a lot of dribble that most don't give a hoot about in their existence. It took the last few paragraphs to ignite me into this piece of writing. The beginning was nothing more than a boring speech you may hear in a class given in some university on the subject of man and his relationship to himself in the technological era of theology. Which in of itself is neither here nor there. But then there is the last few paragraphs to consider in this piece of writing which are driven along brilliant lines of thoughts. So over all, this was a well written article that starts out poorly and ends up in a brilliant piece of thinking... John
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Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Thanks, John...John
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I always enjoy your thought provoking writes and look forward to reading more. You write quite skillfully and it ts refreshing to read an honest look at society. Thanks for sharing this, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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I always enjoy your thought provoking writes and look forward to reading more. You write quite skillfully and it ts refreshing to read an honest look at society. Thanks for sharing this, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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Thank you...John
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, cogitator, I enjoyed reading this essay about the design of the universe, our bodies and the gadgets of the present are linked together.
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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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this is very well written, cogitator, I enjoyed reading this essay about the design of the universe, our bodies and the gadgets of the present are linked together.
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Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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Thank you very much...John
Comment from Erik McGinley
Excellent story / thesis!
This reminds me of some of my process of thought years ago when I was studying computer programming at university. I used to wonder, at times, if computers and human mentality were so naturally analogous that people just naturally compared them.
While I did really like this, I think you might get more travel from it if you tried to simplify the language a little.
Philosophy, I think, does not necessarily have to be 'jargonised' and made sophisticate in order to be sublime.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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Excellent story / thesis!
This reminds me of some of my process of thought years ago when I was studying computer programming at university. I used to wonder, at times, if computers and human mentality were so naturally analogous that people just naturally compared them.
While I did really like this, I think you might get more travel from it if you tried to simplify the language a little.
Philosophy, I think, does not necessarily have to be 'jargonised' and made sophisticate in order to be sublime.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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This is only the start, but your comments have already helped. Thanks...John
Comment from James Dooney
Oh dude this has rocked my world. I was having such a wonderous conversation about world events on the train hme and this has topped it off !!
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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Oh dude this has rocked my world. I was having such a wonderous conversation about world events on the train hme and this has topped it off !!
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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There definitely is more to come...John
