Bel Air: A Bard's Guide
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Comment from CR Delport
Yeah, I don't know Kolov. I think the Bard is too much for you to handle. Lincoln almost gave the game away, but luckily recovered quickly. I am glad that Fluffy saw the truth. Another great chapter.
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Yeah, I don't know Kolov. I think the Bard is too much for you to handle. Lincoln almost gave the game away, but luckily recovered quickly. I am glad that Fluffy saw the truth. Another great chapter.
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Like your poem about Siberia Russia, neat. Well done, mate. Nice pictures to boot. That guy kind of looks like a bald headed Edge. The wrestler. Didn't know the Bard was a bad ass? I bet that dungeon did smell ripe. You did a marvelous job on this chapter. Kolov sounds Russian. That poem struck me. It stood out for me. I'm impressed how you can post a chapter and write them contest entries. I can barely get a chapter posted. It reads and looks fantastic! Count your doubloon. wackydo
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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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Like your poem about Siberia Russia, neat. Well done, mate. Nice pictures to boot. That guy kind of looks like a bald headed Edge. The wrestler. Didn't know the Bard was a bad ass? I bet that dungeon did smell ripe. You did a marvelous job on this chapter. Kolov sounds Russian. That poem struck me. It stood out for me. I'm impressed how you can post a chapter and write them contest entries. I can barely get a chapter posted. It reads and looks fantastic! Count your doubloon. wackydo
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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I'm pretty sure it is Edge. I crazy picture of him though. Not his usual look. Hahaha. Yeah, the Bard is totally bad. He's special ops. He served in Pakistan as a one man team off the record. Love his poems too. It's weird to write someone else's poetry. One day I'll post my story about a group of people that came over with the pilgrims on the Mayflower. They are kind of mystical. All of them are writers and poets. "The Caramel". But, they're minds are very advanced and they are able to leave there bodies and their life spans are very long because they don't age when they aren't in their bodies. Hahaha. Crazy! It's funny, I joined to post all the stuff I had already written. After a month, I started writing all new stuff. The old stuff is still gathering dust. Check your mail! mikey
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Oh yeah, Mikey. i remember you telling me about that Mayflower story. i sounds real interesting I like that era. beginning of America and Indians. i bet it would be a good next novel after you finish this one. You won't be starting from scratch. I like the concept. i thought that was Edge. Finally posted that bloody chapter. Lots of action! read it when you fill up to it -- it's not long or short either. I paid 82 cents to see if that will help, but I kind of doubt it.
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It's almost impossible to get interest in a book once it's already rolling. You're usually stuck with the loyal few. If you get it on the front page you'll get some extra reviews, but they usually don't amount to much as far as input goes. Some of them are not bad though. But, for what it costs it can be frustrating.
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What I figured. I probably wasted some member cent pumps. Did me damage earlier. Heck I got to get up in four hours, had not been to bed yet. Sleeping is for sissies, you told me. LOL!
