Bel Air: A Bard's Guide
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Barry inspects, The Bard is captured"Sequel to The Bard of Bel Air.
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Comment from ProjectBluebook
Lots of humor in this unit. I like how the Bard does that krout slang. That trigger some laughs. Probably concluded he was nuts! Star Trek Next generation is on one my favorite Sy Fy series. I watched it last night. I get a kick out of Wharf. Nice Klingon picture. I like a book with pictures. I like them bibles with pictures. I looked pretty good, saw no SPAG errors. Looks shipshape. Count your doubloon. I was entertained. A good addition to your triology. They are in for a surprise, if they choose to interrogate the Bard. LOL! Love it Mikey! do loco, wackydo, Spooky Doo, i got three alias
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Lots of humor in this unit. I like how the Bard does that krout slang. That trigger some laughs. Probably concluded he was nuts! Star Trek Next generation is on one my favorite Sy Fy series. I watched it last night. I get a kick out of Wharf. Nice Klingon picture. I like a book with pictures. I like them bibles with pictures. I looked pretty good, saw no SPAG errors. Looks shipshape. Count your doubloon. I was entertained. A good addition to your triology. They are in for a surprise, if they choose to interrogate the Bard. LOL! Love it Mikey! do loco, wackydo, Spooky Doo, i got three alias
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
Comment from Sonaleeka
Lovely writing along with very much captivating words.I enjoyed thoroughly the whole story.Glad got a chance to read your poem.God bless!
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Lovely writing along with very much captivating words.I enjoyed thoroughly the whole story.Glad got a chance to read your poem.God bless!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
Comment from Sankey
Hehe another good chapter mate. Only one fair dinkum spag I think or maybe even two???
inspect the faiclities(facilities) especially the prisoner's quarters.
Alex, on everything. BECAUES, (is this deliberate mispell or what?)
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Hehe another good chapter mate. Only one fair dinkum spag I think or maybe even two???
inspect the faiclities(facilities) especially the prisoner's quarters.
Alex, on everything. BECAUES, (is this deliberate mispell or what?)
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
Comment from seaglass
I've lost track of time. How long have the kids been kept captive? It will be a scary showdown getting them out and then deciding what to do with them. Angela's dad can't adopt all of them. you will have a surprise for us, I'm sure.
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I've lost track of time. How long have the kids been kept captive? It will be a scary showdown getting them out and then deciding what to do with them. Angela's dad can't adopt all of them. you will have a surprise for us, I'm sure.
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Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
