You Never Know
rhyming quatrains in 8/6/8/6146 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
It's the simplest of items that can make the best toys! Bags top the list! I especially liked the homily: "You never know when falling rocks/ might turn to stepping stone--". Your rhymed quatrains are very satisfying. Hugs- Joan
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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It's the simplest of items that can make the best toys! Bags top the list! I especially liked the homily: "You never know when falling rocks/ might turn to stepping stone--". Your rhymed quatrains are very satisfying. Hugs- Joan
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Yep, the kid has a future as a bag boy at the supermarket - that and boxes. LOL Thanks so much, Joan :-) Brooke
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He'll definitely make all the customers smile! ;) -J
Comment from jmdg1954
Kids will find the darnedest things to play with.
Your poem was skillfully arranged, held a nice cadence and rhyme.
God has his way of magically appearing everywhere to guide you in the right direction. Nicely done... John
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Kids will find the darnedest things to play with.
Your poem was skillfully arranged, held a nice cadence and rhyme.
God has his way of magically appearing everywhere to guide you in the right direction. Nicely done... John
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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John, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from evilynne
There many fantastic things that can happen, as your poem so marvelously states. It is, as always, well written and conveys its message very clearly. Evi
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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There many fantastic things that can happen, as your poem so marvelously states. It is, as always, well written and conveys its message very clearly. Evi
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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Evi, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from rod007
The surprises of life. As they say 'you never know.' But one thing you do know is that nature, love and happiness will have a surprise waiting for you. You never know do you? Well done, Brooke.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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The surprises of life. As they say 'you never know.' But one thing you do know is that nature, love and happiness will have a surprise waiting for you. You never know do you? Well done, Brooke.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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rod, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from l.raven
HI Brooke, look what Miranda bought at the store....LOL...does Sawyer know....???? this is too cute...we had a cat that used to do that...LOL...and I love the wording in this one...if you close your eye's you will never know what is out there....so very well written you...love your poem...and loveeeee the picture....Luff Linda xxoo
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HI Brooke, look what Miranda bought at the store....LOL...does Sawyer know....???? this is too cute...we had a cat that used to do that...LOL...and I love the wording in this one...if you close your eye's you will never know what is out there....so very well written you...love your poem...and loveeeee the picture....Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Linda, thank you so much, my friend :-) Sawyer's cats love bags and boxes and baskets too :-) Brooke
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you are so welcome...xxoo
Comment from Leineco
Ya know. . .I'm beginning to think there's a trend developing. You seem pretty consistently intrigued by the idea of love popping up unexpectedly lately. Hmmm. . .
Another lovely poem about the mysterious and often overlooked or missed ways of love - and how being open and positive has a defining impact :-)
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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Ya know. . .I'm beginning to think there's a trend developing. You seem pretty consistently intrigued by the idea of love popping up unexpectedly lately. Hmmm. . .
Another lovely poem about the mysterious and often overlooked or missed ways of love - and how being open and positive has a defining impact :-)
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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Leineco, thank you :-) Sadly, no love is popping up for me, but I'm happy with the "old" love of my family :-) Brooke
Comment from Bina1
Happiness........we must look and find it in all the little things in life! What a sweet surprise this was, and "pop" there he is! Pure happiness!
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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Happiness........we must look and find it in all the little things in life! What a sweet surprise this was, and "pop" there he is! Pure happiness!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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Bina, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Delahay
This is full of uplifting thoughts. Always be open to surprises because we never know what good will come along when we least expect it. Of course, not all surprises are good ones, but that is part of life.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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This is full of uplifting thoughts. Always be open to surprises because we never know what good will come along when we least expect it. Of course, not all surprises are good ones, but that is part of life.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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Ward, thank you so much :-) Yeah, there is always the mugger hiding in the bushes kind of surprise, but someone else can have the gig of writing about those things. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from Curly Girly
What an adorable little photo! I enjoyed reading this lovely, sweet poem. It is so cute. Perfect as always, Brooke. A charming little story with a lot of truth.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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What an adorable little photo! I enjoyed reading this lovely, sweet poem. It is so cute. Perfect as always, Brooke. A charming little story with a lot of truth.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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CG, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This poem displays so many unusual ideas that it makes very interesting reading, Brooke. I enjoyed it very much, especially the rhyming verses, Giddy
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This poem displays so many unusual ideas that it makes very interesting reading, Brooke. I enjoyed it very much, especially the rhyming verses, Giddy
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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Giddy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
