You Never Know
rhyming quatrains in 8/6/8/6146 total reviews
Comment from skye
The possiblities are endless. The joy of life is a dish served daily, in infinite and wonderful permutations.
Your poem is rollicking, lyrical, and fun to read.
Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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The possiblities are endless. The joy of life is a dish served daily, in infinite and wonderful permutations.
Your poem is rollicking, lyrical, and fun to read.
Well done.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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Thank you, Skye :-) and good morning! Brooke
Comment from Jackarrie
I enjoyed reading this poem Brooke, very true There is always hope, so we must remain open to change and not stay stuck.
You never know, and never will
if you should close your eyes
to all the possibilities
that dwell in sweet surprise.
Well written
Mary
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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I enjoyed reading this poem Brooke, very true There is always hope, so we must remain open to change and not stay stuck.
You never know, and never will
if you should close your eyes
to all the possibilities
that dwell in sweet surprise.
Well written
Mary
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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Mary, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from boxergirl
You never know... I like the repetition of these words in each stanza. It emphasizes the possibilities of life but we have to be open to new surprizes
in life. 8-)
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You never know... I like the repetition of these words in each stanza. It emphasizes the possibilities of life but we have to be open to new surprizes
in life. 8-)
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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Thank you, boxergirl, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Diny
Brooke the master!- your rhythm and rhyme never disappoint!- A fine ditty that reads quite pretty- accompanied by an angel! Always nice to read you- write on!-Di
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Brooke the master!- your rhythm and rhyme never disappoint!- A fine ditty that reads quite pretty- accompanied by an angel! Always nice to read you- write on!-Di
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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boxergirl, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from innerworlds
What lovely, uplifting words. Time and again, life has taught me that, although whatever it is that's around the next corner might be be out of sight, if I look for it with a smile and a happy heart, the surprise will be much sweeter when I find it. More times than not, this has been the case.
The photo is adorable. Hoping this little one is part of your family. Thank you for sharing your joyous spirit with us, my dear. You made my day.
Randi
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What lovely, uplifting words. Time and again, life has taught me that, although whatever it is that's around the next corner might be be out of sight, if I look for it with a smile and a happy heart, the surprise will be much sweeter when I find it. More times than not, this has been the case.
The photo is adorable. Hoping this little one is part of your family. Thank you for sharing your joyous spirit with us, my dear. You made my day.
Randi
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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Thank you, Randi, for your gracious review :-) He is my one and only grandchild :-) Brooke
Comment from tedanytime
"You never know, and never will
if you should close your eyes
to all the possibilities
that dwell in sweet surprise."
This is great advice to those growing up in this world. With eyes buried in blueberries and ears drowned with deafening sound, many will miss the message.
This has nice rhyme and rhythm.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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"You never know, and never will
if you should close your eyes
to all the possibilities
that dwell in sweet surprise."
This is great advice to those growing up in this world. With eyes buried in blueberries and ears drowned with deafening sound, many will miss the message.
This has nice rhyme and rhythm.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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Ted, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from stanishmichelle
This is such a pleasant poem. It's true the possibilities are endless and dreaming about the things we want can bring a bit of joy to our lives. Michelle
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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This is such a pleasant poem. It's true the possibilities are endless and dreaming about the things we want can bring a bit of joy to our lives. Michelle
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
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Michelle, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from sibhus
Great thoughts put to such marveloues that paint such a beautiful picture. The possiblities are endless, if only we keep searching the horizan of chance. Your unique thoughts make foe a delightful poem, Brooke.
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Great thoughts put to such marveloues that paint such a beautiful picture. The possiblities are endless, if only we keep searching the horizan of chance. Your unique thoughts make foe a delightful poem, Brooke.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
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sibhus, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from billgrumman
A poem of hope at a time when I could use some. Thank you. And thank you for using a rhyming scheme instead of free verse. You deserve your Number One rank at Fanstory. Please keep writing. And you are quite right, we will never know when something really good has happened to us, to judge that takes the perspective of time. Thank you again.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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A poem of hope at a time when I could use some. Thank you. And thank you for using a rhyming scheme instead of free verse. You deserve your Number One rank at Fanstory. Please keep writing. And you are quite right, we will never know when something really good has happened to us, to judge that takes the perspective of time. Thank you again.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much, Bill :-) Congrats on your great showing in story of the month :-) Brooke
Comment from babylonia
Brooke,
This one is wonderful. I smiggled all the way through it. The picture is awesome too. I remember when Tira was small enough to sit in the bag. Hope you're having a great summer.
Love,
Barbara
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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Brooke,
This one is wonderful. I smiggled all the way through it. The picture is awesome too. I remember when Tira was small enough to sit in the bag. Hope you're having a great summer.
Love,
Barbara
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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Barbara, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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Brooke,
You're welcome.
Love,
Barbara
