Mama Tries to Pin the Blame
two wildly wildly modified triolets125 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, brooke, and poor sawyer has a grandmother that shares his picture of shame with the writing world, lol. these are definitely modified. i love the picture. made me smile
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
this is very well written, brooke, and poor sawyer has a grandmother that shares his picture of shame with the writing world, lol. these are definitely modified. i love the picture. made me smile
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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sweetwoodjax, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Dear Brook,
What a chuckle this one brings. He is adorable with his 'gelled' hair. Miranda has become a fantastic photographer. She reply shouldn't Tryon to pin the blame of every little thing on Sawyer. He just couldn't do it all by himself.
Nicely done, Carolyn
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
Dear Brook,
What a chuckle this one brings. He is adorable with his 'gelled' hair. Miranda has become a fantastic photographer. She reply shouldn't Tryon to pin the blame of every little thing on Sawyer. He just couldn't do it all by himself.
Nicely done, Carolyn
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Carolyn, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Gladness
LOL, Oh, that shot is precious! Lol, it is just too cute! Love the poem, it looks like he could be saying, "It wasn't me!" What fun!
Anita
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
LOL, Oh, that shot is precious! Lol, it is just too cute! Love the poem, it looks like he could be saying, "It wasn't me!" What fun!
Anita
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Anita, thank you so very much, my friend, for your generous response to this bit of fun :-) Brooke
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello adewpearl, Your poem made me laugh. I especially liked:
but I have something to proclaim
about the way she pins the blame
for all those things that might bring shame
on me and all our family:
(Stated as emphatically as the "home alone" kid. Hopefully, Unlike "Kevin" .... Hopefully, Sawyer will not make his family disappear - lol.)
A fun poem. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
Hello adewpearl, Your poem made me laugh. I especially liked:
but I have something to proclaim
about the way she pins the blame
for all those things that might bring shame
on me and all our family:
(Stated as emphatically as the "home alone" kid. Hopefully, Unlike "Kevin" .... Hopefully, Sawyer will not make his family disappear - lol.)
A fun poem. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, LateBloomer :-) so glad you got a laugh out of this :-) Brooke
Comment from DALLAS01
He is so animated. Just want to caption each photo. He will be talking about this one when he has his own children.
Mama needs to put this one away for a later laugh.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
He is so animated. Just want to caption each photo. He will be talking about this one when he has his own children.
Mama needs to put this one away for a later laugh.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, Dallas :-) Brooke
Comment from Deniz22
Ha-ha! Great one, but poor Sawyer...we're laughing with you son, not at you. At least you've got enough hair to do that which is more than I can say! Good write, Grandma!Dennis
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
Ha-ha! Great one, but poor Sawyer...we're laughing with you son, not at you. At least you've got enough hair to do that which is more than I can say! Good write, Grandma!Dennis
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, Dennis :-) He does have a nice head of hair :-) LOL Brooke
Comment from Connie C
I love how you come up with such clever and entertaining poetry with each picture of Sawyer. I recently posted a picture of my grandson in the bath as well. Someday these grandsons of ours will look back at these pictures we've posted of them naked and let's hope they find them as charming as we do. I loved this poem with its lighthearted tone that gives all the blame to poor mama.
Connie
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
I love how you come up with such clever and entertaining poetry with each picture of Sawyer. I recently posted a picture of my grandson in the bath as well. Someday these grandsons of ours will look back at these pictures we've posted of them naked and let's hope they find them as charming as we do. I loved this poem with its lighthearted tone that gives all the blame to poor mama.
Connie
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Connie, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Ha Ha Ha LOL at your poem, Brooke, not at poor Sawyer with his hair gelled. Oh dear, we may just have to arrest Miranda for child abuse! LOL. We can see from your photos that Miranda and her son have a lot of fun together, what a sweet poem for the collection, Giddy
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
Ha Ha Ha LOL at your poem, Brooke, not at poor Sawyer with his hair gelled. Oh dear, we may just have to arrest Miranda for child abuse! LOL. We can see from your photos that Miranda and her son have a lot of fun together, what a sweet poem for the collection, Giddy
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Giddy, thank you so much :-) Yep, it is practically criminal LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from pipersfancy
Brings back such good memories of my own little ones in the tub! Oh, yes... we Mamas are a terrible bunch... gelling up our tykes hair and snapping photos of the defenceless wee ones!
PF
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
Brings back such good memories of my own little ones in the tub! Oh, yes... we Mamas are a terrible bunch... gelling up our tykes hair and snapping photos of the defenceless wee ones!
PF
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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PF, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Zinnia48
this was such a lot of fun! It portrays so beautifully the goofy things we do to our children/grandchildren so that we can laugh at their sweet expense1. Great visual and word picture! Caroline .
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
this was such a lot of fun! It portrays so beautifully the goofy things we do to our children/grandchildren so that we can laugh at their sweet expense1. Great visual and word picture! Caroline .
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Caroline, thank you so much for your thoughtful comments and generous sixth star :-) Brooke