Mama Tries to Pin the Blame
two wildly wildly modified triolets125 total reviews
Comment from Sasha
Oh yes, we parents do do some of the cruelest things to our children thinking it is cute...but the day will come when they will get their revenge...they really do. Fun, delightful poem with a precious photo to go with it.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Oh yes, we parents do do some of the cruelest things to our children thinking it is cute...but the day will come when they will get their revenge...they really do. Fun, delightful poem with a precious photo to go with it.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much, Valerie :-) I hope you're starting to feel and look better. :-) Brooke
Comment from Pili Pubul
LOLl. I still believe Sawers's life is " primrose path".
love the expression ! What a fun poem it make my day
laughing, what a great picture of Sawyer's expression
great model for sure ... Pili
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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LOLl. I still believe Sawers's life is " primrose path".
love the expression ! What a fun poem it make my day
laughing, what a great picture of Sawyer's expression
great model for sure ... Pili
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, Pili :-) So glad you laughed. Brooke
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You are very welcome. ;:-) Pili
Comment from Drew Delaney
Another cute poem for Sawyer. I like the primrose path expression. Never heard of it before that I remember. I don't imagine you are using any particular poetry form here. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Another cute poem for Sawyer. I like the primrose path expression. Never heard of it before that I remember. I don't imagine you are using any particular poetry form here. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much, Drew - it is the triolet form but with many liberties taken in the repeating lines. :-) Brooke
Comment from c_lucas
No child has the courage to blame either of his parent. Miley had made celebrity wearing clothes Optional. Give Sawyer his electric guitar and send him on stage. This is very well written.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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No child has the courage to blame either of his parent. Miley had made celebrity wearing clothes Optional. Give Sawyer his electric guitar and send him on stage. This is very well written.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Charlie, thanks for the laugh and the review :-) Brooke
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Yoou're welcome Brooke. Charlie
Comment from ElegantButler
A wonderfully amusing little poem. Even without the picture, I could imagine the hair pointing up in the air like the long stem on a maraschino cherry. A delightful poem.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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A wonderfully amusing little poem. Even without the picture, I could imagine the hair pointing up in the air like the long stem on a maraschino cherry. A delightful poem.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Elegant Butler, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Sonjalee
Again , another great poem. This one is complicated in a triolet form. I will have to look it up. Whenever I read your poems. Brooke, I get a lot of enjoyment from them and I LEARN.
It is well written, funny, adorable, and the picture makes it unique and special.Your poem always flow and are lkovely to read.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Again , another great poem. This one is complicated in a triolet form. I will have to look it up. Whenever I read your poems. Brooke, I get a lot of enjoyment from them and I LEARN.
It is well written, funny, adorable, and the picture makes it unique and special.Your poem always flow and are lkovely to read.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Sonja, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from RYME4U
How wonderfully delightful this is to read. The picture is so darling, too.I think Sawyer has become your Muse. He inspires you with something new every day.Great job!
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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How wonderfully delightful this is to read. The picture is so darling, too.I think Sawyer has become your Muse. He inspires you with something new every day.Great job!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, RYME4U - and a wonderful muse he is :-) Brooke
Comment from robina1978
This is hilariously funny and certainly justified modifying the Triolet. And of course Sawyer does not want the blame: his mother did it. Good general layout.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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This is hilariously funny and certainly justified modifying the Triolet. And of course Sawyer does not want the blame: his mother did it. Good general layout.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Ine, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Dawn Munro
HAHAHAHAHA! Awww, you're too much, Grandma- and Mommy! Sheesh! What am I gonna do when I'm twenty-two and these poems are floating around out there, hmmm? (LOL - how adorable!)
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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HAHAHAHAHA! Awww, you're too much, Grandma- and Mommy! Sheesh! What am I gonna do when I'm twenty-two and these poems are floating around out there, hmmm? (LOL - how adorable!)
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much, Dawn - if the kid ever sasses us, we'll blackmail him with the photos and the poems. LOL :-) Brooke
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LOL!
Comment from granny goes viral
There you go again. This is so adorable. Poor little tyke, mom taking photos of me at my worst. Primrose path indeed. Full of rocks that path is. I will never live this photo down. Good job.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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There you go again. This is so adorable. Poor little tyke, mom taking photos of me at my worst. Primrose path indeed. Full of rocks that path is. I will never live this photo down. Good job.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Thank you so very much, Granny :-) Brooke
