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Writings From the Heart

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A book of Poetry & Writing

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Comment from Pyrrho
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Rather than review I shall answer: Man is the only source of evil on our planet earth, religious claims of evil devils notwithstanding.

My take is if man employs WMD to destroy mankind, I hope there is no ark about to save it.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
    is this about man?
Comment from lancellot
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Very interesting. I can see purgatory as being in a state where one lives with regret, pain and the misery of that has gone wrong in life. To leave it, is to cast the past behind and seek a brighter future. Thought provoking work.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
    thank you for this
Comment from c_lucas
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
    thank you Mr C for this
reply by c_lucas on 10-Aug-2014
    You're welcome, Gary. Charlie
Comment from royowen
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Oh dear! A very sad tale of lost faith! A great articulate poem, dimensions lost and gained, it just goes to show anyway, attitude to one's feelings have to be maintained ! It is a matter of choice as to one's equilibrium in life's quest or not, great write, I enjoyed the philosophical challenge of this poem! Blessings, Roy.

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 Comment Written 10-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
    thank you Roy not much I can say about this one

    Gary