Writings From the Heart
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Comment from Dave Russell
This is such an accurate depiction of childhood summer love. I am also of the "Moody Blues" era. Thank you for the trip down memory lane, which of course makes this such a delightful read.
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This is such an accurate depiction of childhood summer love. I am also of the "Moody Blues" era. Thank you for the trip down memory lane, which of course makes this such a delightful read.
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Thanks Dave
Comment from dennis4242
Very nice and I can reflect why back when, before I was married on meetings and first kisses. I like the way the picture is presented also. Good work!
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Very nice and I can reflect why back when, before I was married on meetings and first kisses. I like the way the picture is presented also. Good work!
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Thank you Dennis for this
Comment from aureanesha
Love it, I always Love love sad poems. Remembering past, bring nostalgias feelings. Warm, yet sad feeling, Your poem flows nicely through the past memories. Amazing what words can do. Great Job ;)
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Love it, I always Love love sad poems. Remembering past, bring nostalgias feelings. Warm, yet sad feeling, Your poem flows nicely through the past memories. Amazing what words can do. Great Job ;)
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Thank you
Comment from Acquired Taste
Whoa, Moody Blues reference here...will have to find the track and play it today!
I actually have "one" that walked away and I remember to this day. Amazing how the heart and mind meld at times.
Nicely done, and a very enjoyable read. Made me think about those years gone by. AT=/
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Whoa, Moody Blues reference here...will have to find the track and play it today!
I actually have "one" that walked away and I remember to this day. Amazing how the heart and mind meld at times.
Nicely done, and a very enjoyable read. Made me think about those years gone by. AT=/
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Thanks
Comment from Kingsland
How many of us can still remember our first love, I am sure there are many who don't. This was a well written poem that will take many back to fond memories in their lives. This was well written and reads smoothly... John
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How many of us can still remember our first love, I am sure there are many who don't. This was a well written poem that will take many back to fond memories in their lives. This was well written and reads smoothly... John
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Thanks
Comment from Goodauthor
I remember those days. Those are the days of my childhood, when the dream ended in tragedy for my friend. Yes, I remember. Well done.
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I remember those days. Those are the days of my childhood, when the dream ended in tragedy for my friend. Yes, I remember. Well done.
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Comment from TOMORAL
I remember those crazy, lazy days of summer romance when the world was beautiful, before our innocence was taken by the reality of life. This is beautiful and perfectly written. Giving it the six it deserves.
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I remember those crazy, lazy days of summer romance when the world was beautiful, before our innocence was taken by the reality of life. This is beautiful and perfectly written. Giving it the six it deserves.
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Thank you for this
Comment from rjuselius
"Summer loving had me a blast, oh yeah
Summer loving happened so fast,
I met a girl crazy for me,
Met a boy cute as can be,
Summer days drifting away,
To, uh oh, those summer nights"
grease says it all:)
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
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"Summer loving had me a blast, oh yeah
Summer loving happened so fast,
I met a girl crazy for me,
Met a boy cute as can be,
Summer days drifting away,
To, uh oh, those summer nights"
grease says it all:)
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
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Thank you Rebekah
Comment from DR DIP
Yeah, really nice I love reminisce poems I write so many I just find the subject so inspiring.
this is beautifully written my friend even though every line is not rhyming as those ones purely carry into the next rhyming line. I love this style of writing thanks for posting
dip
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Yeah, really nice I love reminisce poems I write so many I just find the subject so inspiring.
this is beautifully written my friend even though every line is not rhyming as those ones purely carry into the next rhyming line. I love this style of writing thanks for posting
dip
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Thank you DR this one was for fun
Gary
Comment from royowen
I remember my first love as if it were yesterday, I was 7 she was 6, there were a few more since, we moved to another country, I have wondered whatever happened to her, her name was Jean Hughes, I loved your write, it was articulate, well expressed, well done, blessings, Roy.
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I remember my first love as if it were yesterday, I was 7 she was 6, there were a few more since, we moved to another country, I have wondered whatever happened to her, her name was Jean Hughes, I loved your write, it was articulate, well expressed, well done, blessings, Roy.
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Thank you Roy
