Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "CareFree Days of Summer"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Pyrrho
Ah the what-ifs of life. One should be, What if we had no memories. I remember at five years old (yes I learned to read at 4 1/2)reading about the pleasure of memories and wnanting to get older so I would have some.
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Ah the what-ifs of life. One should be, What if we had no memories. I remember at five years old (yes I learned to read at 4 1/2)reading about the pleasure of memories and wnanting to get older so I would have some.
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Thank you
Comment from Eric1
I love this 'just for fun' poem Gary, I always remember that first awkward kiss on a date, this poem has a wonderful breezy couldn't care less flow to it, I greatly admire anyone who can write this sort of poem 'for fun'. what a brilliant poet you are!
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I love this 'just for fun' poem Gary, I always remember that first awkward kiss on a date, this poem has a wonderful breezy couldn't care less flow to it, I greatly admire anyone who can write this sort of poem 'for fun'. what a brilliant poet you are!
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Thanks Eric
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You are so welcome Gary
Comment from chromeangel33
This was a very intriguing and heart felt poem. I'm sure in some way or another you have brought back memories for all of us. Great job
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This was a very intriguing and heart felt poem. I'm sure in some way or another you have brought back memories for all of us. Great job
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Thank you
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Carefree Days of Summer' is an extremely well-written and delightfully written piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review.
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'Carefree Days of Summer' is an extremely well-written and delightfully written piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review.
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Thank you Duchess this was for fun thanks for reading
Gary
Gary, you're more than welcome.
Best wishes, the Duchess
Comment from Jackarrie
I love your poem, I could capture the moments of the past when we were so young, although I am still with my first love it does change over the years, and it is nice to remember the emotions of youth.
Well written
mary
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I love your poem, I could capture the moments of the past when we were so young, although I am still with my first love it does change over the years, and it is nice to remember the emotions of youth.
Well written
mary
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thanks Mary
Comment from Delahay
This does well in bringing back memories of carefree summer days and the first stirrings of the feeling of love. How different things were at the time when we had no idea of what was to come in our lives.
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This does well in bringing back memories of carefree summer days and the first stirrings of the feeling of love. How different things were at the time when we had no idea of what was to come in our lives.
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thanks for reading
Comment from Glasstruth
Beautiful reminiscing that ends in a question which I also have in my life of people I've seen in years, and will never. There seems to be a bit of sorrow here. Nice flow throughout. Very nicely written. Les
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Beautiful reminiscing that ends in a question which I also have in my life of people I've seen in years, and will never. There seems to be a bit of sorrow here. Nice flow throughout. Very nicely written. Les
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thank you for reading
Comment from rmj09
This is a beautiful poem and the picture you picked makes it stand out.
The rhyming moves the poem forward. The rhythm helps to complete the poem.
The emotions felt are love, sadness and contempt.
This poem tells a great story we all go through.
Keep writing.
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This is a beautiful poem and the picture you picked makes it stand out.
The rhyming moves the poem forward. The rhythm helps to complete the poem.
The emotions felt are love, sadness and contempt.
This poem tells a great story we all go through.
Keep writing.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
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thank you for this
Gary
Comment from c_lucas
When a relationship breaks apart, release it and start anew. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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When a relationship breaks apart, release it and start anew. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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this was just for fun Mr C
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You're welcome.
Comment from l.raven
you know what Gary...I do remember my first love...that first kiss....an then he had to move...we kept in touch for awhile...then moved on...you always wonder...I love your poem...and love the picture...very nicely written...and yes still out of sixes...hate this...luff Linda xxoo
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you know what Gary...I do remember my first love...that first kiss....an then he had to move...we kept in touch for awhile...then moved on...you always wonder...I love your poem...and love the picture...very nicely written...and yes still out of sixes...hate this...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
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thank you Linda
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you are always welcome...xxoo
