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The Heart of Poetry

Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "For they are His to give"
'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway

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Comment from heyjude
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notesandmore, I enjoyed your expressing your faith
in this short poem. The beauty He created certainly
should make people think of God and His good gifts
and give Him the praise.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
    Thanks so much for your thoughtful comments and generous rating. I am glad you liked this one. :-) Carolyn
Comment from lakeport
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For they are His to give, indeed that's a beautiful expressed poem, very nice rhyming.I enjoyed reading it. God bless you.Hugs!lakeport.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
    Thank you for your wonderful reviews. :-) Carolyn
reply by lakeport on 17-Aug-2014
    your welcome.Hugs!lakeport.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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This is a beautifully composed poem, my friend. I love the first 2 lines of the first two stanza especially. Take care, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
    Thank you dear Debbie,
    I am happy you enjoyed this one,
    Love, Carolyn
Comment from Sanku
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They are beautiful thoughts.The first stanza drew me in and I loved the way He 'yearns to dwell within all of us.I every wonderful sights that we see, God dwells there and this fact should console us.

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 Comment Written 12-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
    He is so good, thanks for this wonderful review.
    Love, Carolyn
Comment from rrabinow
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I enjoyed reading your poem. I like that your poem conveys faith and hope. I like your use of description in this poem. Great picture as well.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
    Many thanks for this wonderful review and the six star rating. I am so glad you enjoyed, 'For they are His to give."
    :- Carolyn
Comment from country ranch writer
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SOARING THROUGH LIFE AT A FAST PACE WE DON'T ALWAYS HAVE TIME TO STOP AND THINK. WE ARE REALLY AT A DISAVANTAGE FOR GOD HAS PUT OUT A BEAUTIFUL WORLD AND WE ARE JUST TO BUSY TO ACKNOWLEDGE IT IS EVEN HERE

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
    How very true. Thank you for your wonderful comments. :-) Carolyn
reply by country ranch writer on 11-Aug-2014
    Smile
Comment from jmdg1954
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Carolyn, sorry I'm a bit late in reading. We went to see our son and grandchildren this weekend (7 1/2 hour drive to Virginia).

Once again you softly detail the wonders of God and his presence among us at all times, no matter what. Thank you for that reminder... John

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
    Hi John, I hope your family is doing well. Sounds like you had a good time. Thank you for your comments, we are still in AZ, has been a more relaxing trip this time. Love, Carolyn
Comment from Maureen's Pen
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Dear Carolyn - This has such a wonderful lyrical feel when read aloud. I loved your message and your easy way of bringing me into the piece itself, to ponder and enjoy your message. I really loved this one, you did a great job overall.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
    Thank you Maureen,
    You encourage me, I am glad you liked 'For they are His to give'
    Love you, Carolyn
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is excellent, Carolyn, we just have to look at God's creation and find the joy that He meant for us to have. excellent imagery presented in these words. I enjoyed reading it

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
    Thanks for you kind comments. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Cajungirl
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Such a wonderfully uplifting poem. I thank God everyday for the many blessings in my life. I could each day as a special gift.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
    I know you do V, thanks for this sweet review. :-) Carolyn