Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Excellent

No doubt at all in my mind that in another life, Miranda was a photographer full-time! What a delightful photo with Sawyer's silhouette in the foreground. I did so enjoy your poem, a joy to read your rhyming quatrains, Brooke. Giddy

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014

Thank you so much, Giddy - I keep passing everyone's compliments on to her :-) Brooke

Comment from madhatter1977

Excellent

Really great poem about paying attention to love. The rhyme seems effortless which is something you are brilliant at and it works so well. Best wishes, Pete :)

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014

Pete, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

We never know when love will find us or what form it will take,
So we should be receptive to its possibility.
What a great picture to illustrate your message.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014

Nancy, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

a thought provoking poem with a serious message that attentiveness is not to be taken lightly for it can lead to sorrow.
Perfectly paired picture and poem

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014

emrpoems, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

OMG Brooke, this just touched my heart...your poem...and Sawyer standing there watching her...what a cutie Chloe is...I just love this Brooke...heartwarming...so sweet so very nicely written...Love ya Linda xxoo luff

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014

Thanks so very much, Linda :-) Brooke

reply by l.raven on 09-Aug-2014

you are so welcome...xxoo luff

Comment from Pili Pubul

Excellent

Wonderful perfect. Quatrains on a very meaningful
subject, my favorite stanza is the second one, but I love it all.
Delightful picture from Miranda of Sawyer at the window looking at
Chloe . Smiles. Pili

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014

Pili, thank you so very much :-) Brooke

reply by Pili Pubul on 09-Aug-2014

You are so welcome. Pili

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

My first thought was that most be cute Chloe! My second-- beware of "heedless inattention"! I enjoyed your thoughts all gathered up in neat rhymed quatrains. Happy weekend- Joan

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014

Thank you so much, Joan :-) She is a sweetheart and she loves Sawyer so very much :-) Brooke

Comment from Tonulak

Excellent

Dear Brooke,
This was just lovely! You have a very clean and clear way of expressing your poetic thoughts. The rhyming and non-rhyming lines gave this a certain lilt. Lovely writing--Ted

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014

Ted, thank you so very much :-) Brooke

Comment from zanya

Excellent

And stirrings of Love arrive early in our lives - it is ultimately what makes the world go round and 'heedless inattention' to its presence can indeed 'only lead to sorrow'.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014

zanya, thank you so very much :-) Brooke

Comment from MM lives on :)

Excellent

Oh my goodness now that Brooke is an adorable
picture and indeed perfect for your poem
Loved the poem like always very playful and crafty
Thanks for sharing always a pleasure

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014

Christopher, thanks so much :-) Brooke