If Love Should Saunter Up My Walk
rhyming quatrains129 total reviews
Comment from Angel Debbie
Nice quatrain write using great descriptive words to describe the picture of your Grandson and his friend Chloe.
And you are right if you don't pay attention you'll never know when love will grow.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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Nice quatrain write using great descriptive words to describe the picture of your Grandson and his friend Chloe.
And you are right if you don't pay attention you'll never know when love will grow.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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Angel Debbie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from c_lucas
One's life is not complete if one doesn't love and be loved. This is very well written with a smooth flow words, Makig for a very good read.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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One's life is not complete if one doesn't love and be loved. This is very well written with a smooth flow words, Makig for a very good read.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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Charlie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You're welcome, Brooke. Charlie
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Dear Brooke,
I am so glad at least one of us is still inspired to write. That must be you, as I am having a dry spell. LOL . This poem tells such a sweet story of being aware when love could possibly become available to us, and to what extent we should go to maintain that love.
Sawyer waiting for Chloe is priceless.
Well done, Carolyn
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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Dear Brooke,
I am so glad at least one of us is still inspired to write. That must be you, as I am having a dry spell. LOL . This poem tells such a sweet story of being aware when love could possibly become available to us, and to what extent we should go to maintain that love.
Sawyer waiting for Chloe is priceless.
Well done, Carolyn
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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Carolyn, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from boxergirl
Great set of quatrains about waiting and watching eagerly for the possibility of love as opposed to feeling sorry for oneself and letting life pass you by. A good lesson for us all! 8-)
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Great set of quatrains about waiting and watching eagerly for the possibility of love as opposed to feeling sorry for oneself and letting life pass you by. A good lesson for us all! 8-)
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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boxergirl, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from JavaJunkie
This is such a sweet poem with a strong message and good imagery,
Should possibility be possible in the third line?
I like the encouragement to let go of sorrow, there is a time and place, but a life full of sorrow is a waste.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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This is such a sweet poem with a strong message and good imagery,
Should possibility be possible in the third line?
I like the encouragement to let go of sorrow, there is a time and place, but a life full of sorrow is a waste.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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thank you for your thoughtful review - no, I'm using possibility as a noun - the possibility of love serves as an incentive Brooke
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Lol...I see that now:)
Comment from GWHARGIS
Ah, first love. I can remember it well. Just the possibility of being together was wonderful. I iked the 'open up your eyes' attitude of this. Great rhythm and upbeat feeling.
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Ah, first love. I can remember it well. Just the possibility of being together was wonderful. I iked the 'open up your eyes' attitude of this. Great rhythm and upbeat feeling.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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Gretchen, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Trybuck
Chloe reminds me a lot of our granddaughter. We should always be attentive those around us. They may not be the love of our lives but probably need a little expression of love..
Well done, Buck
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Chloe reminds me a lot of our granddaughter. We should always be attentive those around us. They may not be the love of our lives but probably need a little expression of love..
Well done, Buck
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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Buck, thanks so much, my friend :-) I bet your granddaughter is just as cute as they come. Brooke
Comment from flamingstar
A sweet and simple message to always be aware of the ones God sends our way. We never know the impact we have on people - even the smallest gestures can make a world of difference in ways we never imagined. Every encounter is a "possibility" to show that love...
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A sweet and simple message to always be aware of the ones God sends our way. We never know the impact we have on people - even the smallest gestures can make a world of difference in ways we never imagined. Every encounter is a "possibility" to show that love...
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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flamingstar, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Sasha
I couldn't pass up reading this one. I am still not doing any reviewing until at least Monday when my eye opens up a bit more. What a lovely poem about how love is so important and if we don't pay attention we can too often miss it standing right in front of us. Marvelous photo...Miranda is a great photographer. Enjoyed this one very much. I tried not to smile as I read it but failed...it hurts to smile!
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I couldn't pass up reading this one. I am still not doing any reviewing until at least Monday when my eye opens up a bit more. What a lovely poem about how love is so important and if we don't pay attention we can too often miss it standing right in front of us. Marvelous photo...Miranda is a great photographer. Enjoyed this one very much. I tried not to smile as I read it but failed...it hurts to smile!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, Valerie :-) I'm so sorry smiling is painful - I hope that damned doctor knows what he is doing. Brooke
Comment from RYME4U
Excellent. This has a very good message to give and the word flow evenly. The multisyllable rhymes are quite well done.
This is an excellent piece of work.
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Excellent. This has a very good message to give and the word flow evenly. The multisyllable rhymes are quite well done.
This is an excellent piece of work.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, RYME4U :-) Brooke
