Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Very dramatic alliterated first line, by this mystery poet who is instantly recognisable by his fabulous presentation and clever dark words. :-)

I'll take the advice in your notes. :-)

Excellent.

Cheers, Ray

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2014

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hey this is a beautifully enraged and angry entry for this competition, it is so full of Scottish revenge, and you are right, you should beware an angry red haired Scottish lass. good luck in the contest with your wonderful entry.

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 Comment Written 08-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2014

Thanks, Eric, and I thought I'd go outside the proverbial "box", as we would normally think of Autumn, and make her an angry, Scottish lassie with a huge chip on her shoulder. I don't know how well it will be received, but I do like to be different all the same.

Thanks so much for your awesome review, my friend.

reply by Eric1 on 08-Aug-2014

Yes, going outside the box could be a winner my friend.

reply by the author on 08-Aug-2014

Sometimes it works, and sometimes, eh-h-h-h-h, not so much. But, we'll see. :}