By Autumn they'd Fall
She sought vengeance for their crimes...32 total reviews
Comment from Alan K Pease
Your poetry about the history of things that are in your purvey are always enlightening. I don't think that this vision of Autumn will encounter any problems.
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Your poetry about the history of things that are in your purvey are always enlightening. I don't think that this vision of Autumn will encounter any problems.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2014
Comment from NurseBarb
Wow, glad you pulled this off. Brave move, not using the actual season autumn. Great presentation and cleverly written. Congrats on your win Dean.
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Wow, glad you pulled this off. Brave move, not using the actual season autumn. Great presentation and cleverly written. Congrats on your win Dean.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2014
Comment from Nosha17
You have that many postings, that many wins, I cannot keep up with them, compared to my measly one poem! I am too busy getting my book ready, and soon I will probably vanish from the scene! Congratulations on your win, well deserved and wish you luck in all of your endeavours. Well chosen words and illustration to compliment your poem. Thank you for all your support and wish you well with your book. Best wishes Faye
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You have that many postings, that many wins, I cannot keep up with them, compared to my measly one poem! I am too busy getting my book ready, and soon I will probably vanish from the scene! Congratulations on your win, well deserved and wish you luck in all of your endeavours. Well chosen words and illustration to compliment your poem. Thank you for all your support and wish you well with your book. Best wishes Faye
Comment Written 10-Aug-2014
Comment from c_lucas
Congratulations on you creative win. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good job.
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Congratulations on you creative win. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good job.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2014
Comment from Delahay
I like your take on Autumn, in making it a person instead of a season. I certainly like the idea of this Autumn seeking vengeance on those who have done her and hers wrong. That she will make them PAY for the the mistake of stepping on her.
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I like your take on Autumn, in making it a person instead of a season. I certainly like the idea of this Autumn seeking vengeance on those who have done her and hers wrong. That she will make them PAY for the the mistake of stepping on her.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2014
Comment from billscott
Lol...your notes added punctuated impact to your short taut poetic master piece.
Thankfully I don't have any bones to pick with a red headed scottish lass...close one...lol
Love the artistic blend as well.
Keep up the awesome work!
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Lol...your notes added punctuated impact to your short taut poetic master piece.
Thankfully I don't have any bones to pick with a red headed scottish lass...close one...lol
Love the artistic blend as well.
Keep up the awesome work!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
Comment from royowen
A great entry in this 5/7/5 prompt contest, I love this poem that speaks of a Scottish Lass being wronged, I loved it good connection with artwork, good luck, Dean, blessings, Roy.
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A great entry in this 5/7/5 prompt contest, I love this poem that speaks of a Scottish Lass being wronged, I loved it good connection with artwork, good luck, Dean, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
Comment from JavaJunkie
Another win...congrats! Another beautiful piece, with beautiful artwork...the complete package:) She has a temper to go with that red hair, huh?!?
I liked how autumn can be read two ways, very clever:)
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Another win...congrats! Another beautiful piece, with beautiful artwork...the complete package:) She has a temper to go with that red hair, huh?!?
I liked how autumn can be read two ways, very clever:)
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
Comment from Bill Schott
This ode to autumn in its seventeen syllables and 5-7-5 format does a terrific job of personifying the elements of the season that drain the life from the leaves.
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This ode to autumn in its seventeen syllables and 5-7-5 format does a terrific job of personifying the elements of the season that drain the life from the leaves.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi anon - This is certainly a unique entry for the 5/7/5. Perfectly written, dramatic and there will not be another of this kind in the contest I'm sure. It is essential that readers do in fact read your author notes to get the meaning behind your poem. Very well done. Good Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
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Hi anon - This is certainly a unique entry for the 5/7/5. Perfectly written, dramatic and there will not be another of this kind in the contest I'm sure. It is essential that readers do in fact read your author notes to get the meaning behind your poem. Very well done. Good Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
