Writings From the Heart
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Comment from JavaJunkie
Beautiful. I loved the pace. It starts out slow and then builds, giving more emotion and tension to the piece. There is one spacing error, looks like an extra space, but other that that it's top notch.
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Beautiful. I loved the pace. It starts out slow and then builds, giving more emotion and tension to the piece. There is one spacing error, looks like an extra space, but other that that it's top notch.
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Thank you
Comment from BCScot
A wonderful piece depicting a terrible time in history. My grandmother was a war bride and my mom was born in England before being brought to Canada. They both told me tales of the bombs and the shelters. I can imagine their experiences through your piece. I love the photo as well, thank you for sharing this great poem!
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A wonderful piece depicting a terrible time in history. My grandmother was a war bride and my mom was born in England before being brought to Canada. They both told me tales of the bombs and the shelters. I can imagine their experiences through your piece. I love the photo as well, thank you for sharing this great poem!
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Thank you
Comment from Raphael Montonaro
Deepwater, a SIX BANGER!! for your anti-war poem. Very well written and should be read by everyone at Fanstory. Thank you for reminding us how had war really is!
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Deepwater, a SIX BANGER!! for your anti-war poem. Very well written and should be read by everyone at Fanstory. Thank you for reminding us how had war really is!
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Thank you for this
Comment from Heidixoxo
Hello....
This is actually such a wonderful piece of poetry you have created. It's beautiful, well worded yet so sad as well. To know this is true is heart wrenching too. You definately deserve the full 6 stars. Thank you for sharing and best of luck to you....xoxo
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Hello....
This is actually such a wonderful piece of poetry you have created. It's beautiful, well worded yet so sad as well. To know this is true is heart wrenching too. You definately deserve the full 6 stars. Thank you for sharing and best of luck to you....xoxo
Comment Written 08-Aug-2014
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Glad that you liked this and thanks for reading
Gary
Comment from kiwijenny
Moving...my dad is British and was evacuated to Wales during the war..
What people have to endure in wartime...you captured it beautifully so we will not forget...well done
God bless
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Moving...my dad is British and was evacuated to Wales during the war..
What people have to endure in wartime...you captured it beautifully so we will not forget...well done
God bless
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Thank you
Comment from IloveJaneAustin
Shelters are safe haven(s) below - havens need to be plural as shelters are plural. People at FanStory!!! Sheesh!! So many views and still no one picked up on that simple mistake, sort of shows you what the reviews are really worth here, doesn't it, lol :)
My parents-in-law were English, and they often talked about the war. And I do believe that never have so many owed so much to so few. The world would be a different place today if John Bull wasn't such a tough character. They lived in the country, but they had people stay from London. Two children, if my memory serves.
I liked the picture you put with this poem, and the poem was very nicely presented and read poetically. Good job, Jane
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Shelters are safe haven(s) below - havens need to be plural as shelters are plural. People at FanStory!!! Sheesh!! So many views and still no one picked up on that simple mistake, sort of shows you what the reviews are really worth here, doesn't it, lol :)
My parents-in-law were English, and they often talked about the war. And I do believe that never have so many owed so much to so few. The world would be a different place today if John Bull wasn't such a tough character. They lived in the country, but they had people stay from London. Two children, if my memory serves.
I liked the picture you put with this poem, and the poem was very nicely presented and read poetically. Good job, Jane
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Comment Written 08-Aug-2014
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People at FanStory!!! Sheesh!! get a life kid
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I have a very good life, thankyou. Sor loser for one star, get a life, bro.
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You squelch for one star, reader beware we have a nasty one here. hahahaahah Care factor? A bit fat zero.
Comment from Laurie's Legacy
what a perfect account of times of war. I would have given you six stars, but I don't have any left. Your verse made me feel as though I was there, experiencing all of those terrible things. It's no wonder you are recognized and all-time best... Very much deserved. Thanks for sharing and thanks for the history lesson.
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what a perfect account of times of war. I would have given you six stars, but I don't have any left. Your verse made me feel as though I was there, experiencing all of those terrible things. It's no wonder you are recognized and all-time best... Very much deserved. Thanks for sharing and thanks for the history lesson.
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thank you
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you are very welcome.
Comment from nomi338
Mankind often asks the question, "How can a god who loves us allow the madness and barbarity of war?" God who does love us gave us the freedom to choose. A freedom we desired and highly value. It is the decision of our chosen leaders to engage in the barbarism of war not God. He does not wage war against man, man wages war against mankind. So we must look to ourselves and the choices we make for the answers we seek.
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Mankind often asks the question, "How can a god who loves us allow the madness and barbarity of war?" God who does love us gave us the freedom to choose. A freedom we desired and highly value. It is the decision of our chosen leaders to engage in the barbarism of war not God. He does not wage war against man, man wages war against mankind. So we must look to ourselves and the choices we make for the answers we seek.
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thank you
Comment from boxergirl
Great reminder of the terrifying times the human race goes through during war time. Most of us can only sympathize and pray to God that it will some day be over.
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Great reminder of the terrifying times the human race goes through during war time. Most of us can only sympathize and pray to God that it will some day be over.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2014
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thank you boxergirl
Comment from Supe
What a wonderful thought provoking write. The picture is perfect. "Lest we forget." I hope not. Nice write. Thank you for sharing your notes.
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What a wonderful thought provoking write. The picture is perfect. "Lest we forget." I hope not. Nice write. Thank you for sharing your notes.
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thanks Supe
