Bel Air: A Bard's Guide
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Hit Records and A Bard Story"Sequel to The Bard of Bel Air.
12 total reviews
Comment from Nosha17
I liked the musical interlude with the recording studios, that was like a trip into the past. So, the siege may soon be in the offing, hope the kids are ok. I wasn't notified of this or the next chapter, just found it on your profile page. You may have missed some of mine. I am posting one later, too about birds!! (the feathered kind). Enjoyable chapter as always. Faye
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I liked the musical interlude with the recording studios, that was like a trip into the past. So, the siege may soon be in the offing, hope the kids are ok. I wasn't notified of this or the next chapter, just found it on your profile page. You may have missed some of mine. I am posting one later, too about birds!! (the feathered kind). Enjoyable chapter as always. Faye
Comment Written 10-Aug-2014
Comment from l.raven
WOW!!! Michael, I like the way you ended this chapter...the third man was a poet...the world was saved...love that Bard....and the girls made their recording...and Lucy is writing Brads words...to put him away...LOL...ya know I love it...very well done you...Luff Linda xoox
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WOW!!! Michael, I like the way you ended this chapter...the third man was a poet...the world was saved...love that Bard....and the girls made their recording...and Lucy is writing Brads words...to put him away...LOL...ya know I love it...very well done you...Luff Linda xoox
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
Comment from Loren (7)
For a moment there I thought I was looking at a page from an encyclopedic page from a Google search. A lot, almost psychedelic, going on that it was a bit hard to follow the story line. Maybe it's just me as this my first toe in the water to your book here.
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For a moment there I thought I was looking at a page from an encyclopedic page from a Google search. A lot, almost psychedelic, going on that it was a bit hard to follow the story line. Maybe it's just me as this my first toe in the water to your book here.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Excellent read. This chapter looks clean and organized. I did not know you could move the pictures sideways. Space bar--i reckon. I almost missed this one. You are improving with the picture presentation. i like the reminiscing scene. A nice sweet poem to boot, lovely poem. i remember Charles Manson hung around the Beach Boys. Remember the Manson murders? What format are you using in this post? I like it. Is it New Roman? What size is the words. This looks perfect. I was intrigued, helluva chapter Mikey. Hope you recovered some of your lost work. Count your doubloon. cheers...
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2014
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Excellent read. This chapter looks clean and organized. I did not know you could move the pictures sideways. Space bar--i reckon. I almost missed this one. You are improving with the picture presentation. i like the reminiscing scene. A nice sweet poem to boot, lovely poem. i remember Charles Manson hung around the Beach Boys. Remember the Manson murders? What format are you using in this post? I like it. Is it New Roman? What size is the words. This looks perfect. I was intrigued, helluva chapter Mikey. Hope you recovered some of your lost work. Count your doubloon. cheers...
Comment Written 08-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2014
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Hey. You can highlight the picture like you would a paragraph and click on the centering bar or the right bar and move it that way. You have to go a little above and a little below it. Yep, Times New Roman 20pt. The little divider lines are MS Sans something near the beginning of the types 22pt, bold, italic. The purple thing in the box is comic something 22pt. Manson, oh yeah. I'm lifetime L.A. We used to visit a house that he passed on all the time. "The Jim Beam Mansion". He saw a picture of Jesus in the bathroom and changed his mind about killing the people there. That fool is still alive! Didn't recover a thing. But, have a direction in mind now... Gracias! mikey
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That's crazy! he really saw a picture of Jesus and changed his mind about killing? i got a Jesus picture in the bedroom. Manson will die in prison. So, that's where Jim Beam whiskey came from? thanks for telling me about them things. I did not know I could highlight it and move it. i will keep this in mind. Have a groovy day! I ain't been to bed, yet, hell, I'm loco. i want my reviewing pen back, I'm at 103.
Comment from seaglass
I love the little parable that Barb told. If only more people, especially leaders, thought like poets and artists. Warriors and war hawks come from a completely different place.
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I love the little parable that Barb told. If only more people, especially leaders, thought like poets and artists. Warriors and war hawks come from a completely different place.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the pictures. Especially the poet at the end. I love the story. The Bard's song is about the three of them. I hope he is right. They need to end the war of freeing the children, Keep writing. It sounds great so far.
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I love the pictures. Especially the poet at the end. I love the story. The Bard's song is about the three of them. I hope he is right. They need to end the war of freeing the children, Keep writing. It sounds great so far.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
Awesome depiction of LA music scene. Another excellent chalter. Good to see you back in the flow. The story is moving well and the Bard is in top form!! NG
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Awesome depiction of LA music scene. Another excellent chalter. Good to see you back in the flow. The story is moving well and the Bard is in top form!! NG
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
Comment from Sankey
haha another good one mate. Plot still thickening or??
Thanks for an exciting ride. We are all waiting for the big finale! Goodness knows what that will be ha!
Possible slight spag to consider below....
Not sure of the following but see what you think....Barry had driven (it)(-in it) (+into) the dense forest
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haha another good one mate. Plot still thickening or??
Thanks for an exciting ride. We are all waiting for the big finale! Goodness knows what that will be ha!
Possible slight spag to consider below....
Not sure of the following but see what you think....Barry had driven (it)(-in it) (+into) the dense forest
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Interesting tidbits here, such as the one wiht two men on hilltops.
to brandish the superior intellect in the face of a dolt, or ride through a blizzard on the wings of a colt. Only the daughter of Pegasus would know << ROFL! Lovvve that nutty bard (who is just Mikey's alterego). :)
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Interesting tidbits here, such as the one wiht two men on hilltops.
to brandish the superior intellect in the face of a dolt, or ride through a blizzard on the wings of a colt. Only the daughter of Pegasus would know << ROFL! Lovvve that nutty bard (who is just Mikey's alterego). :)
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
Comment from CR Delport
Yeah, with the Bard around I bet there's never a dull moment. I would guess many a record on the hit charts over the years came from some impromptu sessions. This is another well done chapter.
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Yeah, with the Bard around I bet there's never a dull moment. I would guess many a record on the hit charts over the years came from some impromptu sessions. This is another well done chapter.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
