Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

I think I will skip eating at that restaurant - lol. Bill, this was a fun poem and you did a great job in writing it.
Teresa

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2014

Thank you, Teresa, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, bill, you did an excellent job writing this cute little tale about the curious goodies the crazy gourmets could come up with and the one who ate them all

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014

Thank you, sweet, for the excellent review.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

I enjoy the delightful and alliterative character names
I also like the creative and unlikely foods they concoct
good alliteration in gourmet goodies
an amusing closing to an entertaining and imaginative poem :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014

Thank you, Brooke, for the excellent review.

Comment from costellsgirl33

Excellent

That is come tasty sounding food! As a self proclaimed food critic, I would like some samples, lol!

Very nice poem. It made laugh and smile. Very lite hearted and it's about food, which is one of my favorite things

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014

Thank you, Arnetta, for the excellent review. Glad it was funny.

reply by costellsgirl33 on 07-Aug-2014

You are very welcome, Bill! It was great


Arnetta

Comment from Trybuck

Excellent

Maybe you should run this one by Martha Stuart and get her opinion on it. This ole country boy can't seem to appreciate all the ingredients piled together for the spaghetti and Candied trout makes me want to pout..
Well done, Buck

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014

Thank you for the excellent review.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi Bill,

Eeeewwww, candied trout - I don't think so! Gives me the heebee-jeebees! LOL. Although, this was a fun little story.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax ('-')

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014

Thank you, Jax, for the excellent review.

Comment from Avanthikashankar

Average

Initially tried to describe the spaghetti but then all of a sudden changed its tone. Use of rhyming words in poem always adds to its beauty and gives a flow to the poem.

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 Comment Written 07-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014

Thanks for the haircut.

Comment from granny goes viral

Excellent

This really sings and is funny. Didn't make me hungry though.
I wonder why? Anyway, what made this poem pop into your head, run down your arm, and land in your computer?

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2014

Thank you, ggv, for the excellent review. I just start with a name and go until it makes more sense to stop.

Comment from lindalcreel

Excellent

I love this theme. Of course, I love food. LOL The picture is perfect and the writing was well-done. You are becoming quite the poet. Looking forward to reading the next post.

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2014

Thank you, Linda, for taking a peek at this. Bill

reply by lindalcreel on 06-Aug-2014

My pleasure, Bill.

Comment from Acquired Taste

Excellent

Does sound like you needed a laugh for today! And you succeeded in doing that for me. My first chuckle started the moment I read the title...Cyril Seamus Sephrelletti...really?

Nice to know we can still write funny poems instead of concentrating on war, death, famine -- and politics!

Jean

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2014

Thank you, AT, for giving this a look. Bill