A Funny Face
rhyming quatrains in 8/6/8/6158 total reviews
Comment from Deborah Marie
Wow! What a lovely poem about funny faces (of Swayer and Miranda). Just love your clever wording; lends itself to wonderful progression, rhythm and flow. Beautiful rhyming and comparisions throughout. God Bless, Deb
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Wow! What a lovely poem about funny faces (of Swayer and Miranda). Just love your clever wording; lends itself to wonderful progression, rhythm and flow. Beautiful rhyming and comparisions throughout. God Bless, Deb
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2014
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Deb, thank you so very much for your generous and gracious response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from thequeencatalyst
This is a very cute, light-hearted piece of poetry that suits your picture well. I enjoyed reading it and felt as if my mood was brightened by it. Thank you so much for sharing!
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This is a very cute, light-hearted piece of poetry that suits your picture well. I enjoyed reading it and felt as if my mood was brightened by it. Thank you so much for sharing!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2014
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Jasmine, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Dawn Munro
You know, your timing couldn't be better with this sweet, charming poem - just what I needed to read this evening, my friend! :)
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You know, your timing couldn't be better with this sweet, charming poem - just what I needed to read this evening, my friend! :)
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
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Dawn, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Distracted23
There is so much positivity in your poems. They make me smile and remember my childhood. Excellent piece. Thank you for sharing. Be well and always write.
- Jill
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There is so much positivity in your poems. They make me smile and remember my childhood. Excellent piece. Thank you for sharing. Be well and always write.
- Jill
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
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Jill, thank you so much - I watch the news and get so depressed - the world doesn't need me to add to all the negativity
Brooke
Comment from TOMORAL
Oh those funny faces are awesome! What a perfectly written bit of poetry to bring out the best in the pictures. Thanks again for lightening my day!
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Oh those funny faces are awesome! What a perfectly written bit of poetry to bring out the best in the pictures. Thanks again for lightening my day!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, Tomoral :-) Brooke
Comment from rrabinow
What a wonderful poem that you have written. It is so true that making funny faces can turn around your day in a second. Great job. Great picture as well.
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What a wonderful poem that you have written. It is so true that making funny faces can turn around your day in a second. Great job. Great picture as well.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2014
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thank you, rrabinow, for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Leineco
Adorable! What a wonderful way to say
a smile will brighten your day
(every funny face I ever saw
included a smile to cause a he-haw!)
I loved the list of quirks of fate
(especially the one about peas on the plate).
Next time my troubles compile and abound
I'll remember a funny face can turn it around .
8-)
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2014
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Adorable! What a wonderful way to say
a smile will brighten your day
(every funny face I ever saw
included a smile to cause a he-haw!)
I loved the list of quirks of fate
(especially the one about peas on the plate).
Next time my troubles compile and abound
I'll remember a funny face can turn it around .
8-)
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2014
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thank you, Leineco, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from royowen
A wonderful optimistic poem about happy days being created by just having lighthearted fun, and just simply enjoying the day, and pulling funny faces to help things a long! Nice even 8686 syllables for great rhythm, good abcb rhyming! Well done, Brooke, blessings, Roy.
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A wonderful optimistic poem about happy days being created by just having lighthearted fun, and just simply enjoying the day, and pulling funny faces to help things a long! Nice even 8686 syllables for great rhythm, good abcb rhyming! Well done, Brooke, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2014
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Roy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Making funny face to let out the steam when things go wrong and ignore the building up of pressure. I like the dancing of alliterations through out the poem. The back up pictures further enhanced the message.
ola thomas
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Making funny face to let out the steam when things go wrong and ignore the building up of pressure. I like the dancing of alliterations through out the poem. The back up pictures further enhanced the message.
ola thomas
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2014
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Ola, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from tfawcus
Impeccable rhythm to support the lovely humour of this. Your examples of the disasters that beset children in the course of their everyday life are so true to life! Yet it only takes a bit of light-hearted fun to turn that smile the right way up again. An enchanting poem!
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2014
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Impeccable rhythm to support the lovely humour of this. Your examples of the disasters that beset children in the course of their everyday life are so true to life! Yet it only takes a bit of light-hearted fun to turn that smile the right way up again. An enchanting poem!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2014
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tfawcus, thank you so much :-) Brooke
