A Funny Face
rhyming quatrains in 8/6/8/6158 total reviews
Comment from Sasha
How delightful. I just posted an update on my procedure stating I wasn't going to do any reviewing because I am having difficulty seeing...but I just couldn't miss one of yours. They always make me smile I(although smiling hurts right now) and perk me up.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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How delightful. I just posted an update on my procedure stating I wasn't going to do any reviewing because I am having difficulty seeing...but I just couldn't miss one of yours. They always make me smile I(although smiling hurts right now) and perk me up.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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What a sweetheart, and after I called you a sissy for not reviewing. LOL Oops :-) Thank you, my friend :-) Brooke
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Yeah, now I am both quirky AND a sissy....will it ever end???
Comment from costellsgirl33
This is so very sweet! And those pictures are adorable! A funny face indeed is all it takes to turn the day around! Sawyer is such an adorable little boy! And he's always so full of life. It's obvious he's a happy kid that has amazing parents and grandparents!
Very nice job on this happy and upbeat poem!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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This is so very sweet! And those pictures are adorable! A funny face indeed is all it takes to turn the day around! Sawyer is such an adorable little boy! And he's always so full of life. It's obvious he's a happy kid that has amazing parents and grandparents!
Very nice job on this happy and upbeat poem!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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costellsgirl, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are more than welcome!
CG :)
Comment from c_lucas
Humor is a very healthy energy to have. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very humorous read.
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Humor is a very healthy energy to have. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very humorous read.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Charlie, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
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You're welcome, Brooke. Charlie
Comment from rjuselius
So true! A smile from someone can brighten up your mind and day. Your poem made me smile ð???
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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So true! A smile from someone can brighten up your mind and day. Your poem made me smile ð???
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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Rebekka, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Joan E.
I didn't recognize Miranda due to her "funny faces"! I liked seeing your skipping stones make a comeback, and I enjoyed your lighthearted quatrains and their rhymes. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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I didn't recognize Miranda due to her "funny faces"! I liked seeing your skipping stones make a comeback, and I enjoyed your lighthearted quatrains and their rhymes. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Joan, thank you so much :-) She has been making funny faces that make me laugh since she was Sawyer's age :-) Brooke
Ah, ha--it's genetic. Thanks for making me smile- Joan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Your daughter is a perfect mother!!! I'm sure she had a great role model. You did a good job with her. I am glad Sawyer has such a wonderful life.
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Your daughter is a perfect mother!!! I'm sure she had a great role model. You did a good job with her. I am glad Sawyer has such a wonderful life.
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Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much, Barbara :-) She was very shy as a little girl, but she would make these silly faces, and now she is passing them on to her son, much to my delight. Brooke
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Your daughter is such a fun mother, Brooke, I think Sawyer is going to grow up as a caring clever young man. Children need this fun time in their young lives, many don't get it unfortunately. You are I are both lucky with our children. I think your poem sums it all up, a smile can change everything. :) Sandra
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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Your daughter is such a fun mother, Brooke, I think Sawyer is going to grow up as a caring clever young man. Children need this fun time in their young lives, many don't get it unfortunately. You are I are both lucky with our children. I think your poem sums it all up, a smile can change everything. :) Sandra
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Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, Sandra. Yep, she is a prize of a mom, and it saddens me so much to know how many kids are not being treated to Sawyer's lovely childhood :-) Brooke
Comment from elchupakabra
I'm partial to this piece because it happens to me all the time now. My daughter has started mimicking me a lot so she's always making funny faces to make me laugh now, and it gets me everytime lol. Really great work as always, Brooke, thanks for sharing.
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I'm partial to this piece because it happens to me all the time now. My daughter has started mimicking me a lot so she's always making funny faces to make me laugh now, and it gets me everytime lol. Really great work as always, Brooke, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much, elchupakabra, for your generous review. My daughter used to love to make these funny faces when she was little, and now she is passing them on to her son, much to my delight :-) Brooke
