A Funny Face
rhyming quatrains in 8/6/8/6158 total reviews
Comment from Domino 2
Lovely read, Brooke.
Smooth as silk, unforced rhymes and imaginative vivid imagery in real terms and fun exaggerated ones - 'tears go splat' LOL.
Thanks for the smiley 'face' your poem gave me.
Cheers, Ray
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Lovely read, Brooke.
Smooth as silk, unforced rhymes and imaginative vivid imagery in real terms and fun exaggerated ones - 'tears go splat' LOL.
Thanks for the smiley 'face' your poem gave me.
Cheers, Ray
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much, Ray :-) Brooke
Comment from Trybuck
Sometimes it's better just to laugh at the things life brings our way. It makes it a lot easier to deal with. Very well done, Buck
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Sometimes it's better just to laugh at the things life brings our way. It makes it a lot easier to deal with. Very well done, Buck
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, Buck :-) Brooke
Comment from Pili Pubul
Sawyer is a great imitator of the funny faces of his mommy , delicious !!!!
Wonderful poem , perfect style, good rhyme and alliteration, - carts-crash
funny- face , fall- flat, pop- plop, dreams - dashed , I am impress at myself LOL. , becoming aware.... but I am sure I miss some , enjoy reading it , excellent poem.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Sawyer is a great imitator of the funny faces of his mommy , delicious !!!!
Wonderful poem , perfect style, good rhyme and alliteration, - carts-crash
funny- face , fall- flat, pop- plop, dreams - dashed , I am impress at myself LOL. , becoming aware.... but I am sure I miss some , enjoy reading it , excellent poem.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, Pili :-) Brooke
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You are so welcome... Pili
Comment from LIJ Red
Pardon me...I got ensnared in a tough review, and I copied yours.(well, you went through to the end and I already had most of the same items) Your neat kiddy poem is a breath
of fresh air after that one.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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Pardon me...I got ensnared in a tough review, and I copied yours.(well, you went through to the end and I already had most of the same items) Your neat kiddy poem is a breath
of fresh air after that one.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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LIJ, thank you so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hi Brooke,
Well, these are words to live by. It's funny how a smile can change your attitude about the day...and it's so easy to share! On the other hand, it's wonderful when a dad gets home from work to see his family smiling and happy to see him...makes the troubles of the day fade away.
Nice concept and delivery with this thought, best wishes, Bill
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2014
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Hi Brooke,
Well, these are words to live by. It's funny how a smile can change your attitude about the day...and it's so easy to share! On the other hand, it's wonderful when a dad gets home from work to see his family smiling and happy to see him...makes the troubles of the day fade away.
Nice concept and delivery with this thought, best wishes, Bill
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2014
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Bill, thank you so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Those two are quite a pair! Looks like they know how to have fun doing nothing... a verrry useful talent. No boredom in that house! Wonderful poem and awesomen pictures. LOL! :)
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Those two are quite a pair! Looks like they know how to have fun doing nothing... a verrry useful talent. No boredom in that house! Wonderful poem and awesomen pictures. LOL! :)
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, Phyllis. They are looking delighted because right before this photo Sawyer had taught Aaron how to disassemble the picnic table umbrella. LOL :-) Brooke
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Uh, oh! I see trouble ahead. Sawyer's forming an army. LOL!
Comment from TAB_that's me
You are right - a funny face or smile from someone can change your day around. I was having a Monday kind of day today until a very nice happy customer came in. Her smile and attitude changed mine:) Great abcb rhyme. Your daughter has such a nice smile in any of the photos you post of her:)
Teresa
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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You are right - a funny face or smile from someone can change your day around. I was having a Monday kind of day today until a very nice happy customer came in. Her smile and attitude changed mine:) Great abcb rhyme. Your daughter has such a nice smile in any of the photos you post of her:)
Teresa
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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Teresa, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from nomi338
Boy, Sawyer and his pretty mom seem to be having a ball making funny faces. Thank God that they are attractive. Funny faces on an unattractive person can be unpleasant at best and almost guaranteed to frighten the life out of someone. LOL.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Boy, Sawyer and his pretty mom seem to be having a ball making funny faces. Thank God that they are attractive. Funny faces on an unattractive person can be unpleasant at best and almost guaranteed to frighten the life out of someone. LOL.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much, nomi, for the laugh and the review:-) Brooke
Comment from Jackarrie
A funny face is all it takes, to turn the day around. I like this line, because some children have pouted faces if they cannot have what they want.
a nice light entertaining poem
Sawyer must be the most photographed child around.
Well done
Mary
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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A funny face is all it takes, to turn the day around. I like this line, because some children have pouted faces if they cannot have what they want.
a nice light entertaining poem
Sawyer must be the most photographed child around.
Well done
Mary
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Mary, thanks so much :-) My son thinks his sister has taken leave of her senses with all those photos, which you only ever see a tiny fraction of LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi Brooke,
I so remember those booths where, for a quarter you could take four pix in a row. LOL - glamour shots in the day!
Always fun to see our family having fun. Great pix, my friend. Thx for sharing.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax ('-')
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Hi Brooke,
I so remember those booths where, for a quarter you could take four pix in a row. LOL - glamour shots in the day!
Always fun to see our family having fun. Great pix, my friend. Thx for sharing.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax ('-')
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Jax, thanks so much - they actually still have those booths in places like arcades and boardwalk stores :-) Brooke
