Bel Air: A Bard's Guide
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Junior and Angela Reunite"Sequel to The Bard of Bel Air.
11 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
hey you, you never have to say you are sorry...just got to love that bard...LOL...
think you mean past the officer....not that it really matters...love the story...Love the idea of starting a home to help children....I always knew there was a boys town....but always said I would love the start a girl and boys town...if I ever hit the lottery...sigh...just take your time getting it back Michael...very well written...luff Linda xxoo
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hey you, you never have to say you are sorry...just got to love that bard...LOL...
think you mean past the officer....not that it really matters...love the story...Love the idea of starting a home to help children....I always knew there was a boys town....but always said I would love the start a girl and boys town...if I ever hit the lottery...sigh...just take your time getting it back Michael...very well written...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the story. Junior seems to be changing into a better man. Angela got herself some new sisters. The Bared could be looking at a new way of life. The children have taken a shine to him. Sorry abut the lost work. Great work.
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I love the story. Junior seems to be changing into a better man. Angela got herself some new sisters. The Bared could be looking at a new way of life. The children have taken a shine to him. Sorry abut the lost work. Great work.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from Nosha17
I feel bad when I lose a few lines of a poem that I wrote on the bus home from town. I sympathise with you and hope you can recall pretty well what you wrote. I read the last chapter which was very good. This brings people up to date and it was a nice reunion, hope the kids will be ok. Enjoyable as always, Faye
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I feel bad when I lose a few lines of a poem that I wrote on the bus home from town. I sympathise with you and hope you can recall pretty well what you wrote. I read the last chapter which was very good. This brings people up to date and it was a nice reunion, hope the kids will be ok. Enjoyable as always, Faye
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from CR Delport
Oh my, playing "go fish" with the Bard? That must be a hoot :) Good for Angela looking out for her friends. It seems Junior is not so bad after all. Good job.
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Oh my, playing "go fish" with the Bard? That must be a hoot :) Good for Angela looking out for her friends. It seems Junior is not so bad after all. Good job.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
So pleased to see you posting again. I can never get enough of the Bard and he is in great form here. The go fish game is hilarious and I love how the girls are onto how harmless and tongue in cheek he is. Welcome back. Hope you are able to get back on track soon. No rush. NG
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So pleased to see you posting again. I can never get enough of the Bard and he is in great form here. The go fish game is hilarious and I love how the girls are onto how harmless and tongue in cheek he is. Welcome back. Hope you are able to get back on track soon. No rush. NG
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
I like the cartoon fish picture. It's comical. Seven chapter! Dang, that could deflate a soul. You have my sympathy. I know it's hard to recall every detail. Seems ... you can't it as good as it was. Interesting developments. Good idea...the school thing for abused orphans. I liked the little poem. Yep, the Bard thought it was a conspiracy, about the kids ability to pick the threes. The Bard brings fun and humor to this story. I do, remember a lot of what happened. This was not overwhelming, a good start to bring us up to par. The future looks bright from here on. The gangsters have been rounded up and Angela has been rescued, plus a few friends. You did pretty well, recalling what you lost. Well done... nuggets are bone dry do loco
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I like the cartoon fish picture. It's comical. Seven chapter! Dang, that could deflate a soul. You have my sympathy. I know it's hard to recall every detail. Seems ... you can't it as good as it was. Interesting developments. Good idea...the school thing for abused orphans. I liked the little poem. Yep, the Bard thought it was a conspiracy, about the kids ability to pick the threes. The Bard brings fun and humor to this story. I do, remember a lot of what happened. This was not overwhelming, a good start to bring us up to par. The future looks bright from here on. The gangsters have been rounded up and Angela has been rescued, plus a few friends. You did pretty well, recalling what you lost. Well done... nuggets are bone dry do loco
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
So sorry you lost your chapters... huge bummer. I always keep my main book file backed up on a "cloud"... do that from now on. One copy is never enough, as you learned the hard way... poor Mikey.
I lovvvve the scene with the bard playing "go fish".. LOL! And I knew Junior would take in the girls. I hope he doesn't send THEM to that new school/home, but keeps them as his own.
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So sorry you lost your chapters... huge bummer. I always keep my main book file backed up on a "cloud"... do that from now on. One copy is never enough, as you learned the hard way... poor Mikey.
I lovvvve the scene with the bard playing "go fish".. LOL! And I knew Junior would take in the girls. I hope he doesn't send THEM to that new school/home, but keeps them as his own.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from Sankey
Good work a bit hazy but glad we are back on track and looking forward to more more more mate!
I did get to read the previous chapter very good. Sorry about your puter troubles.
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Good work a bit hazy but glad we are back on track and looking forward to more more more mate!
I did get to read the previous chapter very good. Sorry about your puter troubles.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from royowen
I'm not sure what the story is all about but I'll endeavour to pick up the story, when I can, I'll fan you to help out! I read this but withou some background it's difficult to put a critique or a summary, a brief synopsis would help, or a character summary! Blessings, Roy.
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I'm not sure what the story is all about but I'll endeavour to pick up the story, when I can, I'll fan you to help out! I read this but withou some background it's difficult to put a critique or a summary, a brief synopsis would help, or a character summary! Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from Raphael Montonaro
Interesting and very well written. I could find no mistakes. Very nice format and content. Great job! Lets see more! and keep writing!
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Interesting and very well written. I could find no mistakes. Very nice format and content. Great job! Lets see more! and keep writing!
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Comment Written 05-Aug-2014
