Comment from Selina Stambi

Good

Hello Tadie,

The content is well expressed, however, this is not a 5-7-5 poem.

A 5-7-5 ... the first line must have five syllables, the second seven, and the third line, five syllables.

You have 7-10-5.

A re-word would set things right.

Best wishes for the contest.

Sonali

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014

Thanks but I really don't understand

Comment from RodG

Average

There are many who would agree with your definition of "true love."
I would caution you to restructure your poem before the judging begins as your first two lines have too many syllables for a 5-7-5.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2014

Thanks for the tips

Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

True love is indeed something you never forget and does touch your heart and your life. This is well written and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2014

Thank you very much