Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 44 "What good is a man"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Jackarrie
A very good poem, pointing out how life can be destroyed by lack of self preservation A downward spiral that needs much strength to stop
well done
Mary
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2014
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A very good poem, pointing out how life can be destroyed by lack of self preservation A downward spiral that needs much strength to stop
well done
Mary
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2014
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Thanks Mary
Comment from rjuselius
this is an outstanding piece of poetic art! slowly losing man's whole being and what is left? very well written!
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2014
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this is an outstanding piece of poetic art! slowly losing man's whole being and what is left? very well written!
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 05-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2014
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Thank you for reading
Gary
Comment from Kimberly216
This piece is very thought provoking. I read this poem a few times and really tried to grasp what the author is trying to convey. I thought about what trials and tribulations my own husband has been through in his life that might make him feel his soul is denied or the heart sacrificed to the misunderstanding of actions. Lack of self preservation? Either this deals with evolutionary psychology and the fact that males are misunderstood with multiple partners in mating or lack of self preservation in being denied in some way shape or form in love. Maybe I don't understand what good is man? I would like to understand more.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2014
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This piece is very thought provoking. I read this poem a few times and really tried to grasp what the author is trying to convey. I thought about what trials and tribulations my own husband has been through in his life that might make him feel his soul is denied or the heart sacrificed to the misunderstanding of actions. Lack of self preservation? Either this deals with evolutionary psychology and the fact that males are misunderstood with multiple partners in mating or lack of self preservation in being denied in some way shape or form in love. Maybe I don't understand what good is man? I would like to understand more.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2014
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I write to make you think of life we live I this new world we find ourselves in today
Thanks for reading
Gary
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I really liked it simply because it make me think a little further than most pieces I read. I would like to hear more.
Comment from lancellot
Well the answer to that question is clearly none. It is not always easy to know what the right things are anymore in this strange new world. But being a man isn't what it used to be. Thoughtful piece.
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Well the answer to that question is clearly none. It is not always easy to know what the right things are anymore in this strange new world. But being a man isn't what it used to be. Thoughtful piece.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2014
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Thank you for this
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
An excellent question that not many ask today in sincerity or they would not self-mutilate their flesh in defiance of the unconditional love of the Almighty, wishing to be something other than what they were created or as created to be.
I didn't see any spelling or grammatical errors.
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An excellent question that not many ask today in sincerity or they would not self-mutilate their flesh in defiance of the unconditional love of the Almighty, wishing to be something other than what they were created or as created to be.
I didn't see any spelling or grammatical errors.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from kiwijenny
I wonder too...thanks for making such a thought provoking piece....
God thought we were worth it all..but to waste ourselves is the saddest thing
God bless........
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I wonder too...thanks for making such a thought provoking piece....
God thought we were worth it all..but to waste ourselves is the saddest thing
God bless........
Comment Written 05-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from plum145
i think we all lose our humanity to the lack of self definition, understanding and not stating our agenda. Thank you for take the time to search this poem out and bringing it to light.
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i think we all lose our humanity to the lack of self definition, understanding and not stating our agenda. Thank you for take the time to search this poem out and bringing it to light.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2014
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Welcome
Comment from NurseBarb
The image you chose for this poem speaks volumes. It perfectly illustrates the uncertainty and insecurities of this man. This image is sad, but very appropriate for this free verse poem. It is an interesting read and I had to read it a few times in order to try and grasp what the author is trying to communicate. This is unique and different and I'm glad you shared it.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2014
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The image you chose for this poem speaks volumes. It perfectly illustrates the uncertainty and insecurities of this man. This image is sad, but very appropriate for this free verse poem. It is an interesting read and I had to read it a few times in order to try and grasp what the author is trying to communicate. This is unique and different and I'm glad you shared it.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from a.w.brooks
What good is a man to himself when his soul is denied?
The heart sacrificed to misunderstanding of actions.
His mind lost in the translation of unspoken words,
The wellbeing destroyed due to lack of self-preservation
What good is a man?
love the philosophy of man it was a great poem and the words flowed very well happy writing thanks for the read
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2014
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What good is a man to himself when his soul is denied?
The heart sacrificed to misunderstanding of actions.
His mind lost in the translation of unspoken words,
The wellbeing destroyed due to lack of self-preservation
What good is a man?
love the philosophy of man it was a great poem and the words flowed very well happy writing thanks for the read
Comment Written 05-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from lappmellott
Great poem and I loved the photograph, too. Unfortunately, many times we are all misunderstood, misjudged, hated, etc., but to God, we're all His children.
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Great poem and I loved the photograph, too. Unfortunately, many times we are all misunderstood, misjudged, hated, etc., but to God, we're all His children.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2014
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Thank you
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You're welcome.
