Writings From the Heart
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Comment from DSMalott
Well done.
I gave this one a 5 since it processes the marks of deep thinking, even though some of the terminology could be interpreted differently by different readers and perhaps they would arrive at a conclusion other than the writer intended.
I took this to mean a man is doubting himself because of rejection due to his good intentions being misunderstood.
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Well done.
I gave this one a 5 since it processes the marks of deep thinking, even though some of the terminology could be interpreted differently by different readers and perhaps they would arrive at a conclusion other than the writer intended.
I took this to mean a man is doubting himself because of rejection due to his good intentions being misunderstood.
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thank you
Comment from MM lives on :)
Deepwater..i truly loved your use of imagery
chosen for your poem. Its perfect alongside your
Clever use of wording..thanks for sharing it was a pleasure to read
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Deepwater..i truly loved your use of imagery
chosen for your poem. Its perfect alongside your
Clever use of wording..thanks for sharing it was a pleasure to read
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thank you
Comment from amahra
This is a great addition to your book of poems. Loved the art work you chose for this awesome writing. The poem was short but very well crafted and thought provoking.
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This is a great addition to your book of poems. Loved the art work you chose for this awesome writing. The poem was short but very well crafted and thought provoking.
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thank you
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! This poem is deep and thought provoking.
The author's words are strong, creative and descriptive.
The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem.
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Excellent Poem! This poem is deep and thought provoking.
The author's words are strong, creative and descriptive.
The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem.
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thank you
Comment from Eternal Muse
The strongest line was
"What good is a man to himself when his soul is denied?"
Nothing much is available to you if your soul is denied (lol). Excellent artistic presentation with a terrific picture to bring your point across.
I also liked "translation of unspoken words".
An enigmatic and thought-provoking write.
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The strongest line was
"What good is a man to himself when his soul is denied?"
Nothing much is available to you if your soul is denied (lol). Excellent artistic presentation with a terrific picture to bring your point across.
I also liked "translation of unspoken words".
An enigmatic and thought-provoking write.
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thank you
Comment from hari anand
This is just amazing, our life is ruled by misunderstandings, those unspoken words play culprit in ruining relations, well being...well yes it has surrenderd itself to stress, depression. Extraordinarily written.
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This is just amazing, our life is ruled by misunderstandings, those unspoken words play culprit in ruining relations, well being...well yes it has surrenderd itself to stress, depression. Extraordinarily written.
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thank you again for the 6
Gary
Comment from Bobby Jo
What good is a man to himself when his soul is denied? That is a good question, yet his soul is only denied if he refuses the salvation of Jesus at the cross. This is really good.
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What good is a man to himself when his soul is denied? That is a good question, yet his soul is only denied if he refuses the salvation of Jesus at the cross. This is really good.
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thank you bobby
Comment from Alan K Pease
Deep philosophy centred around a man constrained to the fetal position withdrawn from himself in self-denial, misunderstood, mind lost. self-protective features suspended if not lost forever.
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Deep philosophy centred around a man constrained to the fetal position withdrawn from himself in self-denial, misunderstood, mind lost. self-protective features suspended if not lost forever.
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Again thanks
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. A rather pithy wee poem. I like the question style.
And no answer, well no laid out answer. Truly lost in unspoken words, deeds...truly lost.
padumachitta
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Hi. A rather pithy wee poem. I like the question style.
And no answer, well no laid out answer. Truly lost in unspoken words, deeds...truly lost.
padumachitta
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Thanks
Comment from elchupakabra
I enjoyed this piece. I think you really call into question the nature of man and what represents worth and the despair of one who feels worthless. Overall I like that you took a non-traditional approach and thought the picture you used was excellent. Great work overall, thanks for sharing.
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I enjoyed this piece. I think you really call into question the nature of man and what represents worth and the despair of one who feels worthless. Overall I like that you took a non-traditional approach and thought the picture you used was excellent. Great work overall, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
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thank you for the revirw
