What's Ordinary?
philosophy for children148 total reviews
Comment from Acquired Taste
Anytime you are with a child, an outing is never ordinary. The questions come fast and furious and with great intensity. The need to have it answered is immediate and none of that 'let me get back to you on that!'
I so remember my girls at that age and the constant barrage of questions, statements and the calling of, Ma, Ma, Ma, Ma ad infinitum - and there is nothing I wouldn't give to have that time back!
Great poem Brooke - another ace for your portfolio and addition to Sawyer's Book of Grandma!
Jean
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2014
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Anytime you are with a child, an outing is never ordinary. The questions come fast and furious and with great intensity. The need to have it answered is immediate and none of that 'let me get back to you on that!'
I so remember my girls at that age and the constant barrage of questions, statements and the calling of, Ma, Ma, Ma, Ma ad infinitum - and there is nothing I wouldn't give to have that time back!
Great poem Brooke - another ace for your portfolio and addition to Sawyer's Book of Grandma!
Jean
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2014
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Jean, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem. I'm so glad you can identify through your own delightful parenting experiences :-) Brooke
Comment from victor 66
The magic of an inquisitive child or their desire to do something with great enthusiasm is mesmerizing. And you are right, how does one really define "ordinary"? Is an ordinary day just boring, or perhaps our day is very good and we just don't realize it so we consider it "ordinary". This could go on for many paragraphs. I would not do that to you, Brooke. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2014
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The magic of an inquisitive child or their desire to do something with great enthusiasm is mesmerizing. And you are right, how does one really define "ordinary"? Is an ordinary day just boring, or perhaps our day is very good and we just don't realize it so we consider it "ordinary". This could go on for many paragraphs. I would not do that to you, Brooke. Best wishes.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2014
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Victor, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
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My pleasure, Brook.
Comment from gazzagodbod
you cant beat a good worm lol and you captured a perfect poem here my friend well worthy of my last sixer thanks my friend xxgazzaxx
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you cant beat a good worm lol and you captured a perfect poem here my friend well worthy of my last sixer thanks my friend xxgazzaxx
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2014
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Gazza, thank you so much for your generous sixth star, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from seaglass
This is the perspective of a true artist. We see nothing as ordinary and everything as something to inspire. The repetition of repetition of the last line with the first on each verse gives it a song like quality.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2014
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This is the perspective of a true artist. We see nothing as ordinary and everything as something to inspire. The repetition of repetition of the last line with the first on each verse gives it a song like quality.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2014
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seaglass, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Eric1
Do you know Brooke, I read your poems through and through, time and again, trying to find out some of your hidden secrets, but I have now realised that there aren't any! You are just a naturally gifted and brilliant writer, this beautiful poem is exceptionally perfect!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Do you know Brooke, I read your poems through and through, time and again, trying to find out some of your hidden secrets, but I have now realised that there aren't any! You are just a naturally gifted and brilliant writer, this beautiful poem is exceptionally perfect!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Eric, thank you so much for saying such a lovely thing and for your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
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You are very welcome Brooke.
Comment from emrpoems
These little things are what matter. Good mono rhymes in each stanza. Some alliteration and a lovely rhythm. What can be better than spending time as a family.i enjoyed reading tis and especially loved the repetition of your lines and the questions
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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These little things are what matter. Good mono rhymes in each stanza. Some alliteration and a lovely rhythm. What can be better than spending time as a family.i enjoyed reading tis and especially loved the repetition of your lines and the questions
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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emrpoems, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from evilynne
Ordinary outings are often the most special, as are the little wonders you describe in your poem. It is very enjoyable reading, as always.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Ordinary outings are often the most special, as are the little wonders you describe in your poem. It is very enjoyable reading, as always.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Ev, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Loren (7)
So much in life is extra "ordinary" isn't it. Once considered, as you have said here, all things in there one unique way are beyond the ordinary. Loren
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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So much in life is extra "ordinary" isn't it. Once considered, as you have said here, all things in there one unique way are beyond the ordinary. Loren
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Loren, thank you so much :-) I'm so glad you agree. Brooke
Comment from TOMORAL
You paint beautifully pictures with your extraordinary words. Your poems always make me think about the little things I seem to take for granted. This is exceptional...
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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You paint beautifully pictures with your extraordinary words. Your poems always make me think about the little things I seem to take for granted. This is exceptional...
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Tomoral, thank you so much :-) I so appreciate your generous sixth star. Brooke
Comment from Just2Write
Another delightful poem for children of all ages to get them contemplating why they call something ordinary. When we think about it, EVERYTHING is extraordinary. I love the photo you chose. It's rare to see mom, pop, and Sawyer all in the same shot.
The look of wonder in your darlin's eyes is extraordinary too.
Nice work in of your screen name:
where on the grass the dew is pearled
Loved it.
My goodness, Brooke - you just seem to get all my sixes.
Rose.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Another delightful poem for children of all ages to get them contemplating why they call something ordinary. When we think about it, EVERYTHING is extraordinary. I love the photo you chose. It's rare to see mom, pop, and Sawyer all in the same shot.
The look of wonder in your darlin's eyes is extraordinary too.
Nice work in of your screen name:
where on the grass the dew is pearled
Loved it.
My goodness, Brooke - you just seem to get all my sixes.
Rose.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Rose, thank you so very much, my generous friend :-) I am honored to earn your sixes :-) Brooke
