Contest Junkie
5-7-5 Poem-Contest Entry28 total reviews
Comment from Charlene0513
A young scoundrel that is lost and in a heap of trouble not knowing if his actions will pay off.
Strong image portrayed to give those a scare if not a chuckle knowing what he is after.
Charlene
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A young scoundrel that is lost and in a heap of trouble not knowing if his actions will pay off.
Strong image portrayed to give those a scare if not a chuckle knowing what he is after.
Charlene
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count. I like the cute humor. I can just imagine a Fan Story-addicted member holding up other members to demand their votes so he can win contests and lay his hands on the fake money :-) I see since you're offering only 32 cents on your poem that you have not been hauling in the big loot. LOL :-) Brooke
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Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count. I like the cute humor. I can just imagine a Fan Story-addicted member holding up other members to demand their votes so he can win contests and lay his hands on the fake money :-) I see since you're offering only 32 cents on your poem that you have not been hauling in the big loot. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
Comment from seaglass
This is cute and quite funny, However, I don't think your fake gun with its fake bullets and your fake threat will get you fake money. Sorry, nice try though.
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This is cute and quite funny, However, I don't think your fake gun with its fake bullets and your fake threat will get you fake money. Sorry, nice try though.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This does describe the condition of more FanStory writer than we might realize. Clever, with correct count. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer
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This does describe the condition of more FanStory writer than we might realize. Clever, with correct count. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
Oh, this is hilarious!! Perfect form and there is probably way more truth in this than many of us would ever care to admit. This should win. Good luck. NG
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Oh, this is hilarious!! Perfect form and there is probably way more truth in this than many of us would ever care to admit. This should win. Good luck. NG
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
Comment from Cajungirl
Hahaha, what a great 5/7/5 contest entry. Your poem has the correct syllable count per line. I love that artwork and I simply adore your entry. best of luck.
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Hahaha, what a great 5/7/5 contest entry. Your poem has the correct syllable count per line. I love that artwork and I simply adore your entry. best of luck.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
Comment from rrabinow
Such a great poem with the 5-7-5 syllable count. I like how you describe a contest junkie, and you say that you need the votes for the fake money. Great picture. Best of luck. I love it!
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Such a great poem with the 5-7-5 syllable count. I like how you describe a contest junkie, and you say that you need the votes for the fake money. Great picture. Best of luck. I love it!
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Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
Comment from Pyrrho
Are you old enoug."h to remember the pre-TV radio show, The FBI in Peace and War? At least three or four times per half-hour show someone would say, "look out behind you." and after a pause, "Now I got the gun."
If you have American $, then you already have fake money.
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Are you old enoug."h to remember the pre-TV radio show, The FBI in Peace and War? At least three or four times per half-hour show someone would say, "look out behind you." and after a pause, "Now I got the gun."
If you have American $, then you already have fake money.
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Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
