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5-7-5 Poem-Contest Entry

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Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is a cute contest entry, mystery writer, my poems for sale but nobody is buying, lol, so i'll hold it for ransom and hope you vote for it, lol. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2014

Comment from barbara.wilkey
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CUTE, CUTE, CUTE, and more CUTE! This is a very creative contest entry and I enjoyed reading. You did a wonderful job writing this poem. GOOD LUCK

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2014

Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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As soon as I read this, I ran over and voted for it. Bravo! I love anything with original humor, and this certainly made me laugh. Now, with my vote, you're tied for first, but I fear that piano entry will appeal to us old folks more than a laugh. Frankly, I think we old folks ESPECIALLY need a reason to laugh. :)

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2014

Comment from GWHARGIS
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Sounds lie you need an intervention. Loved the comical picture of the bandit. Good theme of the criminal and the victim being forced to vote in the contest polls. Great job on this.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2014

Comment from Acquired Taste
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Creative if nothing else - definitely a way to attempt to garner some funny money. My wishes for best of luck in the contest. AT=/

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2014

Comment from Trybuck
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Thanks for your big heart
I may vote another day
Now, your money's gone


Never can tell, you just might win with this one, Buck

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2014

Comment from rjuselius
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"FREEZE! I've got a gun!
Now, go vote. I'm hurtin' bad.
I need fake money..."
fanstory is so addictive that my friends and family are getting worried:) your little poem reflects all thoughts i would imagine. even if is sarcasm.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!

rebekka x

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2014

Comment from sibhus
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This is so good and perfect too. I so wish that I could this to about a hundred people on here, and get the fake money as well. This is a very orginal idea for the prompt. Good stuff and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2014

Comment from doris1022
Exceptional
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cute poem in humorous meanings. nice short forms and the cat looks like a bandit. needing money. lol

thanks for using my art. hope you have a good weekend. Take care.


Freeze! I've got a Gun
I'm hurting bad, need fake funds
Now go vote or else!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2014

Comment from Bill Schott
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There is a place for this type of surreal anger when someone reads your poem or other work after a contest and says nice things. I now accept the contexts with a 'poetry slam' frame of mind. Popular folks will always win, good or not, but your stuff has been read and critiqued which is always good.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2014