Writings From the Heart
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Comment from Tina McKala
Values of honor, scarred deep on my heart,--> i loved this!
this was a wonderful poem. not a line that i wouldn't like. it flew perfectly and the mesage, the wondering, was so well presented.
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Values of honor, scarred deep on my heart,--> i loved this!
this was a wonderful poem. not a line that i wouldn't like. it flew perfectly and the mesage, the wondering, was so well presented.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
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Thank you for this
Gary
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi again Deepwaer - Another good one from you - very well written contemplative verse. Unfortunately we cannot surmise, we can only hope whatever the future holds it will make up for all past disappointments. A good read. Regards Dorothy
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Hi again Deepwaer - Another good one from you - very well written contemplative verse. Unfortunately we cannot surmise, we can only hope whatever the future holds it will make up for all past disappointments. A good read. Regards Dorothy
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Thank you
Comment from Emily George
Excellent content,end rhyming,and steady meter through out.
Beautiful sentiments.I would give you six but I have none left.
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Excellent content,end rhyming,and steady meter through out.
Beautiful sentiments.I would give you six but I have none left.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
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Thank you Emily
Comment from Chrisfiore
Hello again, deepwater.
Whoa, two poems in one sitting. I must be living right.
Relationships are a tricky thing. Why some work and others don't is a mystery but I think it depends on the givers. Both have to be willing to give and not expect anything in return. That way the returns that do come along, and they will, seem that much more appreciated.
I enjoy reading your poetry. ;) Chrisfiore
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Hello again, deepwater.
Whoa, two poems in one sitting. I must be living right.
Relationships are a tricky thing. Why some work and others don't is a mystery but I think it depends on the givers. Both have to be willing to give and not expect anything in return. That way the returns that do come along, and they will, seem that much more appreciated.
I enjoy reading your poetry. ;) Chrisfiore
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
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Thank you Chris
Comment from elchupakabra
I thought you did a solid job constructing this piece. You made use of a nice rhyme scheme that was aided by proxy rhymes and I enjoyed the questioning nature of the piece. Overall it was a good, ponderous write. Great work on this piece as well, thanks for sharing.
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I thought you did a solid job constructing this piece. You made use of a nice rhyme scheme that was aided by proxy rhymes and I enjoyed the questioning nature of the piece. Overall it was a good, ponderous write. Great work on this piece as well, thanks for sharing.
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Thank you
Comment from Kausar_Javeria
Hello there~!
This new addition to your collection of poems, for me, is the best yet. It carries a lot of feelings which are true and relatable. Great Job!
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
(^_^)-<~~KAUSAR~~>-(^_^)
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Hello there~!
This new addition to your collection of poems, for me, is the best yet. It carries a lot of feelings which are true and relatable. Great Job!
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
(^_^)-<~~KAUSAR~~>-(^_^)
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
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Thank you Kausar
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Reflection on Life' is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. Not for a moment would I attempt to answer this talented poet's rhetorical questions. It was a pleasure to review a poem of this standard.
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'Reflection on Life' is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. Not for a moment would I attempt to answer this talented poet's rhetorical questions. It was a pleasure to review a poem of this standard.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
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Thank you duchess
Comment from Rubylou
When I first saw the illustration, I thought there will be something in this poem that will bring about a conflict.
Your words: mind games, trials, and truths among others rang clear of my perception.
Very well written.
I like the way you ended with a question.
Rubylou
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When I first saw the illustration, I thought there will be something in this poem that will bring about a conflict.
Your words: mind games, trials, and truths among others rang clear of my perception.
Very well written.
I like the way you ended with a question.
Rubylou
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
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Thank you Ruby
Comment from GWHARGIS
I think this deserves a six, and I am sure you will get plenty. Unfortunately, I don't have one to give, and I really, rea;;y want to. This is how everyone feels at one time or another. There are times when a relationship is in doubt and there is the empty helpless feeling that we feel deep in our hearts. Wonderfu; emotion and strong theme. Wonderfully done.
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I think this deserves a six, and I am sure you will get plenty. Unfortunately, I don't have one to give, and I really, rea;;y want to. This is how everyone feels at one time or another. There are times when a relationship is in doubt and there is the empty helpless feeling that we feel deep in our hearts. Wonderfu; emotion and strong theme. Wonderfully done.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
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Thanks GW
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Deepwater,
Thought provoking nice piece of poetry beautifully depicting its theme!
Simple, impressive and perfectly matching the theme wording.
Smooth and enchanting flow throughout the poem.
Lovely rhyming scheme and lively imagery.
The most striking lines are:
"Now I contemplate on life's new surprise,
What is to happen, can you surmise?"
Marvelous!
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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Hello Deepwater,
Thought provoking nice piece of poetry beautifully depicting its theme!
Simple, impressive and perfectly matching the theme wording.
Smooth and enchanting flow throughout the poem.
Lovely rhyming scheme and lively imagery.
The most striking lines are:
"Now I contemplate on life's new surprise,
What is to happen, can you surmise?"
Marvelous!
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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Thank you RP
Gary
