I Love My Mom
rhyming quatrains151 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
Love the line about tuna jumping baack into the ocean,it ahs me laughing. Your theme of the child wishing his supper was different,is a great theme for children's poetry. I like the variety of food described and your smooth rhyming of words adds to the humor of the poem.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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Love the line about tuna jumping baack into the ocean,it ahs me laughing. Your theme of the child wishing his supper was different,is a great theme for children's poetry. I like the variety of food described and your smooth rhyming of words adds to the humor of the poem.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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Thank you, Elaine, for your thoughtful review - I'm so glad it made you laugh :-) Brooke
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, brooke, oh to put that child through the horror of liverwurst, I like raw cauliflower but I love tuna fish. this one made me smile..
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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this is very well written, brooke, oh to put that child through the horror of liverwurst, I like raw cauliflower but I love tuna fish. this one made me smile..
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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sweetwoodjax, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from royowen
A delightful short poem about the gastronomic delights and banes of a small boy, my grandchildren are the same, my granddaughter could eat Macca's fries and Mcbites all day + the soft serve! a beautifully written verse in abcb rhyme with even meter! blessings! Roy,
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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A delightful short poem about the gastronomic delights and banes of a small boy, my grandchildren are the same, my granddaughter could eat Macca's fries and Mcbites all day + the soft serve! a beautifully written verse in abcb rhyme with even meter! blessings! Roy,
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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Roy, thank you so much :-) Sounds like your grand daughter and Sawyer would do well on a date. LOL :-) Brooke
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Yes a " Pygmalion " date! Love them to bits, functional small people aren't they? Roy.
Comment from marion
HI adewpearl
This is the cutest of cute! And how so very true of all us mothers' so guilty of the same crime!
I think Sawyer is gorgeous when he forgives his mother of all these horrific crimes - that obviously his grandmother sees so clearly!
I enjoyed.
Marion.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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HI adewpearl
This is the cutest of cute! And how so very true of all us mothers' so guilty of the same crime!
I think Sawyer is gorgeous when he forgives his mother of all these horrific crimes - that obviously his grandmother sees so clearly!
I enjoyed.
Marion.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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Marion, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from nomi338
Spoken just like the typical ungrateful American child. No matter how hard the mother tries, "this is disgusting!" the ungrateful kid cries. LOL. This is another masterpiece Brooke, and I do love it.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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Spoken just like the typical ungrateful American child. No matter how hard the mother tries, "this is disgusting!" the ungrateful kid cries. LOL. This is another masterpiece Brooke, and I do love it.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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nomi, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Charlene0513
To adewpearl,
An all around mess to endure but appreciate even though the looks seem in despicable the end result is always woth waiting for.
Filled with enjambments.
Charlene
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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To adewpearl,
An all around mess to endure but appreciate even though the looks seem in despicable the end result is always woth waiting for.
Filled with enjambments.
Charlene
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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Charlene, thank you so much for your gracious review :-) Brooke
Comment from Pyrrho
Oh drat! I hate showering 6* reviews on you when so many poets on this site crave but do not deserve them. I save me weekly six hoping in vein to find a gem by a striving youngster that deserves the honor of that sixth star, but such joy abounds as often as my joints do not ache these days in my ninetieth decade.
Here it is Friday and after this one i still have four unused 6* assessments.
What this site needs is a few more excellent poets.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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Oh drat! I hate showering 6* reviews on you when so many poets on this site crave but do not deserve them. I save me weekly six hoping in vein to find a gem by a striving youngster that deserves the honor of that sixth star, but such joy abounds as often as my joints do not ache these days in my ninetieth decade.
Here it is Friday and after this one i still have four unused 6* assessments.
What this site needs is a few more excellent poets.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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Thank you, Pyrrho - if it's any consolation, I truly appreciate it :-) Do you ever read the poetry of Words. She is a free style poet, my favorite poet on fan story to whom I regularly give my sixes. And if you're looking for fantastic prose, there's Humpwhistle on whom I also shower sixes :-) Brooke
Comment from Eric1
This wonderful poem and story is so funny Brooke, told I assume through the eyes of a very young child, there is nothing to fault as usual just a brilliantly perfect poem.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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This wonderful poem and story is so funny Brooke, told I assume through the eyes of a very young child, there is nothing to fault as usual just a brilliantly perfect poem.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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Eric, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are very welcome Brooke
Comment from lakeport
I Love my mom, well,and little Sawyer loves his ice cream sandwhich too, that's a lovely story poem, very nice rhyming as always. I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. Hugs!Lakeport.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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I Love my mom, well,and little Sawyer loves his ice cream sandwhich too, that's a lovely story poem, very nice rhyming as always. I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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Erich, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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your welcome,Hugs!lakepot.
Comment from gypsycaravan
Oh, so very adorable. I love to read your poetry. It feels more like I'm singing and all that know me, realize that is not one of my talents. Ha Seriously, such a cute little story, especially the line about the tuna fish.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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Oh, so very adorable. I love to read your poetry. It feels more like I'm singing and all that know me, realize that is not one of my talents. Ha Seriously, such a cute little story, especially the line about the tuna fish.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, gypsycaravan :-) Brooke
