Beauty of nature
Experience the worlds beauty in a poem!3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 suite, Beauty of Nature, captures a few sights from a possible walk through the fields to witness life all around. Nice.
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This 5-7-5 suite, Beauty of Nature, captures a few sights from a possible walk through the fields to witness life all around. Nice.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
Comment from flylikeaneagle
31 July 2014
Sana: Great observation of nature, from the icy waters to the green trees and light shining bright. This can be anywhere in the world where we appreciate God's creation. I like the despised beauty now soaring with wings. The beauty of life is from the shimmering light of our Lord Jesus.
flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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31 July 2014
Sana: Great observation of nature, from the icy waters to the green trees and light shining bright. This can be anywhere in the world where we appreciate God's creation. I like the despised beauty now soaring with wings. The beauty of life is from the shimmering light of our Lord Jesus.
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much this means alot!
-Sana
Comment from adewpearl
Your syllable count is good in most of the lines
through/the/shim/mer/ing/light is 6 syllables
lakes/of/cold/ic/y/wa/ter is 7 when it should be 5
who once belong - belonged
lovely descriptive detail with good sensory appeal :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Your syllable count is good in most of the lines
through/the/shim/mer/ing/light is 6 syllables
lakes/of/cold/ic/y/wa/ter is 7 when it should be 5
who once belong - belonged
lovely descriptive detail with good sensory appeal :-) Brooke
Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Nevermind :)
