Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, cupa tea, you did an excellent job writing this story about making a choice what life you wanted to live. I would have to say Ice Road Truckers for me followed by little house on the prairie

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014

Thank you...it's all about survival...

Comment from Genya

Excellent

This was a lovely scripted and unusual story. I loved the way it moved through times and places and gave you the choices of different lives. What if before you were born God let you experience 5 different lives. Very cleverly done. I had to think about the five choices at the end and found it very difficult to choose one for myself. Loved this contest entry. Found a couple of mistakes.... hope you don't mind... My jaw was shacking so hard (shaking) I saw a shopping cart fulled to the rim... (filled) Also, at the beginning you may want to look again at the wording... fell upon me causing me to be covered in a fresh layer of frost..could read fell upon me and covered me in a fresh layer of frost. Just a couple of little suggestions. Loved the work though.Genya

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014

thank you for the revisions. I never catch them all. And thank you for the comments about the story. It just came to me...