sedoka-Baby Cries
a mother and her child6 total reviews
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. The first part has the baby crying because of his mother. She is not with him. The second part has him very happy because of his mother. She is with him and showing him love. Great work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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I love the picture. I love the poem. The first part has the baby crying because of his mother. She is not with him. The second part has him very happy because of his mother. She is with him and showing him love. Great work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Thank you
Comment from rrabinow
I enjoyed reading your poem. Great job with the sedoka poem prompt. I like the flow of your poem. Great picture. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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I enjoyed reading your poem. Great job with the sedoka poem prompt. I like the flow of your poem. Great picture. Best of luck.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Thank you
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You are welcome.
Comment from RYME4U
Excellent. This is done in the Sedoka style perfectly. The picture enhances your well chosen words and the feelings come through well. Good job!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Excellent. This is done in the Sedoka style perfectly. The picture enhances your well chosen words and the feelings come through well. Good job!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Lynette Marie
This is such a charming poem, written in perfect sedoka formatting. You have described a timeless moment between a mother and her child, capturing the nurturing love passing between them. The picture you chose is a perfect complement.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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This is such a charming poem, written in perfect sedoka formatting. You have described a timeless moment between a mother and her child, capturing the nurturing love passing between them. The picture you chose is a perfect complement.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
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Thank you
Comment from playinaround
How beautiful is this Sedoka. You have created a calming and safe feeling and a real feel of the beauty of mother and child. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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How beautiful is this Sedoka. You have created a calming and safe feeling and a real feel of the beauty of mother and child. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
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Thank you
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this sedoka poem about the cries that turn to giggles in a mother's arms. I love the picture. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this sedoka poem about the cries that turn to giggles in a mother's arms. I love the picture. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Thank you
