A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Ghost Ship"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
74 total reviews
Comment from tbacha58
Wow Dean, this poem, is so beautiful with the picture , of course your description are amazing as usual. Still I was able to compare it to life stories, what one looses, we should find a way out, no matter what happens during a life time, one should not give up even if its a catastrophic
situation. Beautiful Dean. Love Terry xoxo
My stars from Montreal, will shine above you. xoxo
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Wow Dean, this poem, is so beautiful with the picture , of course your description are amazing as usual. Still I was able to compare it to life stories, what one looses, we should find a way out, no matter what happens during a life time, one should not give up even if its a catastrophic
situation. Beautiful Dean. Love Terry xoxo
My stars from Montreal, will shine above you. xoxo
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Thank you very much for your supportive review, Terry. As always, I appreciate it! :}
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I love the sea and the sound of it, so I really enjoyed this one, Dean. I loved the illustrations, they are really, Deanish! LOL. Ghostly, creepy, and really well written, but a little sad at the end. I loved it!
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I love the sea and the sound of it, so I really enjoyed this one, Dean. I loved the illustrations, they are really, Deanish! LOL. Ghostly, creepy, and really well written, but a little sad at the end. I loved it!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
Comment from barbara.wilkey
phial, you took me to my dictionary with this word: broad flat vessel. Oh my how on Earth do you get the sound effects? You presented a perfect package.
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phial, you took me to my dictionary with this word: broad flat vessel. Oh my how on Earth do you get the sound effects? You presented a perfect package.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
Comment from Darkhorse555
loved how you drew this really grasps you in ways dear friend beautifully crated from the title i tip my hat excellent piece of writing
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loved how you drew this really grasps you in ways dear friend beautifully crated from the title i tip my hat excellent piece of writing
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
Comment from adewpearl
good use of abab rhyming
stunning presentation
good assonance and consonance in please sleep
strong expression of soulful emotion
good alliteration in sweet silence swoons and other
extremely moody in a most compelling way
Brooke
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good use of abab rhyming
stunning presentation
good assonance and consonance in please sleep
strong expression of soulful emotion
good alliteration in sweet silence swoons and other
extremely moody in a most compelling way
Brooke
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
Comment from lindalcreel
Another great poem. I don't know where you get all of your ideas, but you never seem to run out of them. I do enjoy the posts and look forward to the next one. Great picture, by the way.
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Another great poem. I don't know where you get all of your ideas, but you never seem to run out of them. I do enjoy the posts and look forward to the next one. Great picture, by the way.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Dean - I loved your presentation in this work. Your poem so full of those moments we all have lost at sea at times. I enjoyed your word imagery, well crafted and solid writing. This one made me pause after the initial read, and then go back for more. I loved it, I also loved the sounds of sea and creaking ship devoid of life.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
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Dear Dean - I loved your presentation in this work. Your poem so full of those moments we all have lost at sea at times. I enjoyed your word imagery, well crafted and solid writing. This one made me pause after the initial read, and then go back for more. I loved it, I also loved the sounds of sea and creaking ship devoid of life.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
Comment from TAB_that's me
We do all get on that vessel sometimes. It's our choice to go into the storm or take another path. Dean, I love the picture behind - now every one is going to be jealous of that:) Wonderful poem but I guess I didn't have to say that as the stars say it all!
Teresa
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We do all get on that vessel sometimes. It's our choice to go into the storm or take another path. Dean, I love the picture behind - now every one is going to be jealous of that:) Wonderful poem but I guess I didn't have to say that as the stars say it all!
Teresa
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This took FOREVER to load. I almost didn't wait.
Scary Dean. I found the last two stanzas to be engageing.
The presentation is over the top as usual. Wish I knew how you do that! LOL Well done as usual. Best wishes. Nancy
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This took FOREVER to load. I almost didn't wait.
Scary Dean. I found the last two stanzas to be engageing.
The presentation is over the top as usual. Wish I knew how you do that! LOL Well done as usual. Best wishes. Nancy
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
Comment from ravenblack
Night drops black orchids - excellent. Reminds me of the lotus eaters , Mr. Coleridge. I like the subtlety - reads as if the dying/dead crewman is already in another realm or just in the state between. Good choice in not showing the helmsman. I know you probably have, but did you read The Watchmen? The interwoven tale of The Black Freighter?
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Night drops black orchids - excellent. Reminds me of the lotus eaters , Mr. Coleridge. I like the subtlety - reads as if the dying/dead crewman is already in another realm or just in the state between. Good choice in not showing the helmsman. I know you probably have, but did you read The Watchmen? The interwoven tale of The Black Freighter?
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
