Samuel James Nehemiah Hill
a legend in rhyme116 total reviews
Comment from angelface2
Very clever poem, Brooke. I just sit and laugh. Your poems are so much fun to read. Have a great day and keep smiling. MIss Sally
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Very clever poem, Brooke. I just sit and laugh. Your poems are so much fun to read. Have a great day and keep smiling. MIss Sally
Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Miss Sally, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from donnadiann
Good playful words...lopped, not a whit, also great rhyming. Another catchy named character, good job with this subject for the poem:)
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Good playful words...lopped, not a whit, also great rhyming. Another catchy named character, good job with this subject for the poem:)
Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, donnadiann :-) Brooke
Comment from Angel Debbie
I love the name of the character Samuel James Nehemiah Hill
I just would not like to write it in school. LOL I like this little story it flows nice and I bet Sawyer just will love it too. Add it to the collection.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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I love the name of the character Samuel James Nehemiah Hill
I just would not like to write it in school. LOL I like this little story it flows nice and I bet Sawyer just will love it too. Add it to the collection.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Angel Debbie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hello Brooke,
I enjoyed this cool tale of Samuel Hill
A man with the power to make water still
Complete with a knowledge to master each day
while holding large carnivores under his sway.
What a guy! Lol.
I appreciated you usual solid meter and rhyme, and enjoyed the theme of this playful write, well done.
All my best, Bill
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Hello Brooke,
I enjoyed this cool tale of Samuel Hill
A man with the power to make water still
Complete with a knowledge to master each day
while holding large carnivores under his sway.
What a guy! Lol.
I appreciated you usual solid meter and rhyme, and enjoyed the theme of this playful write, well done.
All my best, Bill
Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Bill, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Brooke,
Another enjoyable nonsense tale to add to your 'Sawyer Collection' one day.
Fun to read, I hope Sawyer enjoyed his game on the dinosaurs.
Patrick
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Hi Brooke,
Another enjoyable nonsense tale to add to your 'Sawyer Collection' one day.
Fun to read, I hope Sawyer enjoyed his game on the dinosaurs.
Patrick
Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Patrick, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Where did you find that name? It's a real tongue twister. Oh that photo, when I saw Sawyer's little face, well he looks terrified!! And I don't blame him, that is one big old grizzly something of other! LOL. Bet he had a whale of a time. I loved this poem, Brooke, it is really delightful, even with the wonderful name, which I did eventually master. Don't tell me there is actually someone out there with that name? LOL. :) Sandra
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Where did you find that name? It's a real tongue twister. Oh that photo, when I saw Sawyer's little face, well he looks terrified!! And I don't blame him, that is one big old grizzly something of other! LOL. Bet he had a whale of a time. I loved this poem, Brooke, it is really delightful, even with the wonderful name, which I did eventually master. Don't tell me there is actually someone out there with that name? LOL. :) Sandra
Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Sandra, nope, I pieced the name together :-) Thanks so much for your review. My daughter caught him shouting the last syllable of her name, Momma, which produces the open-mouthed terrified look. She is so clever :-) It is a great dinosaur exhibit that they've visited twice and intend to return to again :-) Brooke
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Does Miranda sell her photos? She has a real talent there. She seems to know exactly when to take the shot. I know a lot of people do, and some are quite famous for being at the right spot at the right time. Apart from that, your pieced together name, was brilliant!
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No, she hasn't done anything professionally with her photography, but she really should :-)
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I agree, perhaps you should suggest it to her. It would be a shame not to. xx
Comment from judiverse
I love the whimsy of this. The name alone would tickle anyone's fancy. Great use of rhyme that really suits the humorous purposes of this poem. You really make Samuel Hill's exploits sound very daring--roping a platypus, tracking a dinosaur, making waterfalls stop, staring down a grizzly. Samuel Hill's adventures are legendary, worthy of a movie, like "The Raiders of the Lost Ark." Just a delight. judi
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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I love the whimsy of this. The name alone would tickle anyone's fancy. Great use of rhyme that really suits the humorous purposes of this poem. You really make Samuel Hill's exploits sound very daring--roping a platypus, tracking a dinosaur, making waterfalls stop, staring down a grizzly. Samuel Hill's adventures are legendary, worthy of a movie, like "The Raiders of the Lost Ark." Just a delight. judi
Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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judi, thank you so much for your thoughtful reading of this poem :-) Brooke
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You're very welcome. Loved it! judi
Comment from Smoothiecool
this is a fun write great children's poem
good visual to portray message
good enjambment through sentences allows flow
good rhyme theme through out each stanza
the repetitive part lines work well for the poem
fun bouncy read
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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this is a fun write great children's poem
good visual to portray message
good enjambment through sentences allows flow
good rhyme theme through out each stanza
the repetitive part lines work well for the poem
fun bouncy read
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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thanks so much, Smoothiecool :-) Brooke
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most welcome..SC >> Faye
Comment from Ekim777
When does a heroic figure become a legend? Surely when he forever attracts our admiring attention. Our poet sketches her figure with consummate aplomb. She mixes a titillating humor with a hint of seriousness; all with the freshness of her language. Her images and cadence blend in perfectly. I hope I am making some sense. -Ekim777
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When does a heroic figure become a legend? Surely when he forever attracts our admiring attention. Our poet sketches her figure with consummate aplomb. She mixes a titillating humor with a hint of seriousness; all with the freshness of her language. Her images and cadence blend in perfectly. I hope I am making some sense. -Ekim777
Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Thank you so very much for your generosity and thoughtfulness, Ekim :-) Brooke
Comment from Sanku
Oh No! I would never dream of competing with Samuel James Nehemiah Hill (phew! what a name)What a character !he could tame a grizzly bear and dry up a flood,rope platypus , stalk dinosaur God knows what else!i loved this poem, Brooke.I feel like your dandelion paying homage to a sun.I hope one day I will read this out to my grandchild.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Oh No! I would never dream of competing with Samuel James Nehemiah Hill (phew! what a name)What a character !he could tame a grizzly bear and dry up a flood,rope platypus , stalk dinosaur God knows what else!i loved this poem, Brooke.I feel like your dandelion paying homage to a sun.I hope one day I will read this out to my grandchild.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, Sanku :-) Brooke
