Samuel James Nehemiah Hill
a legend in rhyme116 total reviews
Comment from Nosha17
This is a delightful children's poem that kids will be enthralled with, it sings along. The rhymes are great and the dinosaur is an added attraction. Great picture and most enjoyable. Faye
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This is a delightful children's poem that kids will be enthralled with, it sings along. The rhymes are great and the dinosaur is an added attraction. Great picture and most enjoyable. Faye
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Faye, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from nomi338
Say what you want, then say it again
No one can compete with Brooke Baldwin.
I have awarded you six stars because if I had written this particular poem, it would already be in the hands of a publisher. I consider it to be that good. Really. Actually.
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Say what you want, then say it again
No one can compete with Brooke Baldwin.
I have awarded you six stars because if I had written this particular poem, it would already be in the hands of a publisher. I consider it to be that good. Really. Actually.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Thank you so very much, my generous and encouraging friend :-) Brooke
Comment from evilynne
Your poetry is fanciful, imaginative and wonderful as always. Your imagination is a great place for both young and old readers to explore. It certainly makes us smile
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Your poetry is fanciful, imaginative and wonderful as always. Your imagination is a great place for both young and old readers to explore. It certainly makes us smile
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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evilynne, thank you so much for your generous review of this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Charlene0513
To adewpearl,
A delightful poem involving a man that had strength and power to subdue any creature in his sight.
The only suggestion I would like to make is: on the third line of each stanza after your first words omit the following word for a (;) to shorten your stanzas.
Charlene
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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To adewpearl,
A delightful poem involving a man that had strength and power to subdue any creature in his sight.
The only suggestion I would like to make is: on the third line of each stanza after your first words omit the following word for a (;) to shorten your stanzas.
Charlene
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Charlene, thank you so much for your feedback :-) Brooke
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Poor Sawyer looks scared in this photo. I'll come to his rescue and together we will fight off that horrible T-REX. I'm coming Sawyer!!!!!
I loved your poem. The bouncy flow caught me.
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Poor Sawyer looks scared in this photo. I'll come to his rescue and together we will fight off that horrible T-REX. I'm coming Sawyer!!!!!
I loved your poem. The bouncy flow caught me.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much, Barbara - it is amazing how lifelike and scary they make the dinosaurs at this exhibit :-) But he gets into it - there are a couple of animatronic dinos that he actually rides like a bucking bronco. LOL Brooke
Comment from c_lucas
A child's imagination is priceless. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
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A child's imagination is priceless. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Charlie, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
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You're welcome, Brooke. Charlie
Comment from jadapenn
Hi Brooke, I loved Samuel Hill and all his powers with nature. He is a brave chap to tackle all those tasks and I admire his tenacity. Well written poem with great visuals. luv jada
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Hi Brooke, I loved Samuel Hill and all his powers with nature. He is a brave chap to tackle all those tasks and I admire his tenacity. Well written poem with great visuals. luv jada
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Jada, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from LIJ Red
Sounds like P. Samuel James Nehemiah Hill Bunyan to me.
There goes the envelope again. Well done as usual. As
youth-oriented as ever. Excellent.
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Sounds like P. Samuel James Nehemiah Hill Bunyan to me.
There goes the envelope again. Well done as usual. As
youth-oriented as ever. Excellent.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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thanks so much, LIJ, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from humpwhistle
Yep, all us Hills has got 'situational control' in
our blood. And Sam's one of the smaller Hills.
Why I remember a time when Aunt Hill faced down a pack of rabid senators--from red states, no less!
Good fun with the names and the derring do.
Did I read you are looking into publishing?
Peace, Lee
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Yep, all us Hills has got 'situational control' in
our blood. And Sam's one of the smaller Hills.
Why I remember a time when Aunt Hill faced down a pack of rabid senators--from red states, no less!
Good fun with the names and the derring do.
Did I read you are looking into publishing?
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Before I scrolled down to your name, I knew only you could have written this review, my witty friend :-) Yep, I am finally giving into my daughter's and other people's suggestion (she is strong arming me). Never cross Miranda. Thanks so much, Lee :-) Brooke
Comment from Kingsland
This Samuel Hill fellow has it going on. He tames bears and commands the waters. This guy can give some good orders. He's a non fearing gent that will not relent. To anything that is in disorder...
I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece of poetic art. It was well written with free flowing thoughts... john
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This Samuel Hill fellow has it going on. He tames bears and commands the waters. This guy can give some good orders. He's a non fearing gent that will not relent. To anything that is in disorder...
I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece of poetic art. It was well written with free flowing thoughts... john
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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John, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
