Samuel James Nehemiah Hill
a legend in rhyme116 total reviews
Comment from Gargantuan2
Excellent!! You could not show more pride than this heart felt poem. I think the little tyke would even like this one. I don't know where you come up with the fancy names, but they sure make the reading fun!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Excellent!! You could not show more pride than this heart felt poem. I think the little tyke would even like this one. I don't know where you come up with the fancy names, but they sure make the reading fun!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Gargantuan, thank you so very much for your thoughtful and generous response to the poem. As for the names, they're half from working really hard to get the syllables/inflection right and half from inspiration. Brooke :-)
Comment from ArtGal
OMG Brooke, when I saw Sawyer at the bottom of this picture, I laughed myself sick! I had work to do on the comp, so came here just to look around and found this. Of course, I had to read! He looks a little scared, but when I read what he did, I take that back. What a strong and brave little man to do all that he did! When I'm in trouble, may I please call on Sam? I know he will protect me and keep me safe. Bravo to Samuel Hill because he's my hero. . .Sharon
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OMG Brooke, when I saw Sawyer at the bottom of this picture, I laughed myself sick! I had work to do on the comp, so came here just to look around and found this. Of course, I had to read! He looks a little scared, but when I read what he did, I take that back. What a strong and brave little man to do all that he did! When I'm in trouble, may I please call on Sam? I know he will protect me and keep me safe. Bravo to Samuel Hill because he's my hero. . .Sharon
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much, Sharon. I asked Miranda what was going on in the picture that he looks so terrified. She told me how clever she was in capturing the shot. Just at the second she snapped the camera he was calling out her name, Momma. She got the shot during the second, open-mouthed syllable. LOL :-) Brooke
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LOL, oh what fun, and Miranda sure is good at taking pictures! Thanks for letting me know how to add picture, and when you have time, I put my daughter on my Profile page! I think I did okay, lol. And for that last post, I did that also, so I'm getting there, and all because of you! You did good, and should post the info you gave me on the Forum...Sharon
Comment from CR Delport
Oh my, the Cute Little One against that big dino. The creature doesn't stand a chance. He's about to get an attack of cuteness :) This is another gem of a poem.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Oh my, the Cute Little One against that big dino. The creature doesn't stand a chance. He's about to get an attack of cuteness :) This is another gem of a poem.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much, CR - an attack of cuteness, you have me laughing. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from emrpoems
As usual a lovely flow of words with good mono rhymes in each stanza.
Loved the presentation and I know that the children will enjoy reading this one
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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As usual a lovely flow of words with good mono rhymes in each stanza.
Loved the presentation and I know that the children will enjoy reading this one
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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emrpoems, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from tbacha58
Samuel climbed to a mountain top,
right to the cliff where the waters drop --
Say what you like without a word lopped,
no one but Sam makes waterfalls stop.
Hi Brooke, Can you ever go wrong in writing any poem? no no no.
Even children's poems you make sound so beautiful, you have a way to rhyme your poems, that is unique my friend, and little Sawyer watching the bear, so so cute. I just read that you mentioned Pasadena, do you live in Los Angeles, Pasadena? because my son leaves in Burbank, and I visit him every year during Christmas , if yes, maybe we can meet and have a coffee, if yo want. Hugs Terry xoxo
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Samuel climbed to a mountain top,
right to the cliff where the waters drop --
Say what you like without a word lopped,
no one but Sam makes waterfalls stop.
Hi Brooke, Can you ever go wrong in writing any poem? no no no.
Even children's poems you make sound so beautiful, you have a way to rhyme your poems, that is unique my friend, and little Sawyer watching the bear, so so cute. I just read that you mentioned Pasadena, do you live in Los Angeles, Pasadena? because my son leaves in Burbank, and I visit him every year during Christmas , if yes, maybe we can meet and have a coffee, if yo want. Hugs Terry xoxo
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, Terry - I live in Pennsylvania, but my daughter and her family live in Encino, which is near Pasadena :-) Brooke
Comment from lancellot
Very good, it sounds like Samuel Hill either a god or at the very least superman. Great little tale, it was well crafted and entertaining. What a guy.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Very good, it sounds like Samuel Hill either a god or at the very least superman. Great little tale, it was well crafted and entertaining. What a guy.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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lancellot, thank you so much :-) I'll go with super hero :-) Brooke
Comment from Dawn Munro
Yikes! LOL. Oh Brooke, I LOVE the meter in this - it's just so rollicking - so much fun! You are amazing (and I'm running short on eloquence to tell you. LOL)
I LOVE this!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Yikes! LOL. Oh Brooke, I LOVE the meter in this - it's just so rollicking - so much fun! You are amazing (and I'm running short on eloquence to tell you. LOL)
I LOVE this!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Dawn, thank you so much, my generous and encouraging friend :-) Brooke
Comment from janalma
Cute poem. Sounds like he's a pretty tough nut, that ole' Samuel Hill. Lol. Akin, I think, to Paul Bunyan. Good little story here. I think kids would like it read to them. I know my little grandson, Jeremiah, would. Flowing cadence as always.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Cute poem. Sounds like he's a pretty tough nut, that ole' Samuel Hill. Lol. Akin, I think, to Paul Bunyan. Good little story here. I think kids would like it read to them. I know my little grandson, Jeremiah, would. Flowing cadence as always.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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janalma, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from rhymelord
You can say what you like about sweet adewpearl
There's times when her poems will make your hair curl
Just mention a topic - she'll give it a whirl
And Sam Hill's got nothing on this Yankee girl.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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You can say what you like about sweet adewpearl
There's times when her poems will make your hair curl
Just mention a topic - she'll give it a whirl
And Sam Hill's got nothing on this Yankee girl.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much for the smile, the review and the poem, Reg :-) Brooke
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Now Sam is a pretty powerful person
he can tame bears, stare down a dinosaur
stop waterfalls and rope a platypus by the bill
His full name is Samuel James Nehemiah Hill
I usually chuckle throughout your poems, this one is no exception. Well done, Carolyn
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Now Sam is a pretty powerful person
he can tame bears, stare down a dinosaur
stop waterfalls and rope a platypus by the bill
His full name is Samuel James Nehemiah Hill
I usually chuckle throughout your poems, this one is no exception. Well done, Carolyn
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Carolyn, thank you so much :-) Brooke
