A Tapestry
free verse35 total reviews
Comment from Loren (7)
What a beautiful and creative way to express a family heritage a kaleidoscope of colors a patchwork quilt of this and that - stitched and held together, proudly. Well done - Loren
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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What a beautiful and creative way to express a family heritage a kaleidoscope of colors a patchwork quilt of this and that - stitched and held together, proudly. Well done - Loren
Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much, Loren. I appreciate your kind comments. 8-)
Comment from TAB_that's me
I love this free verse! I wish i had a six left. I'm glad you have a colorful family tree. I like the highlighted colors to emphasize this. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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I love this free verse! I wish i had a six left. I'm glad you have a colorful family tree. I like the highlighted colors to emphasize this. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa
Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Thanks, Teresa. I just got back from a cousin's reunion. Very colorful family, but love them all. 8-)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am in awe at how you did the colors on your poem. I enjoyed reading the poem too. I have often felt I am a mutt or a Heinz 57. LOL I am sure you will do well in the contest but I will wish you luck anyway. Good luck.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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I am in awe at how you did the colors on your poem. I enjoyed reading the poem too. I have often felt I am a mutt or a Heinz 57. LOL I am sure you will do well in the contest but I will wish you luck anyway. Good luck.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Thanks, Barbara. All God's creatures are beautiful! 8-)
Comment from jadapenn
A very deep yet lovely free verse poem. You weave well all the traits of a tight knit family that has survived over the ages with the strong roots that were laid. Best wishes for the contest. I enjoyed the poem. luv jada
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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A very deep yet lovely free verse poem. You weave well all the traits of a tight knit family that has survived over the ages with the strong roots that were laid. Best wishes for the contest. I enjoyed the poem. luv jada
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Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much, jada! I appreciate your insight into my poem. 8-)
Comment from Genya
This is a lovely piece of work. It goes well with the picture and l love the way the words stand out proudly in their coloured little boxes. A lovely sentimental piece of work about the tapestry which is all about your family tree. I did find a small error...sorry. Just a typo...Unique yet stylish in its on way (own). Best of luck in the contest. Genya
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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This is a lovely piece of work. It goes well with the picture and l love the way the words stand out proudly in their coloured little boxes. A lovely sentimental piece of work about the tapestry which is all about your family tree. I did find a small error...sorry. Just a typo...Unique yet stylish in its on way (own). Best of luck in the contest. Genya
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Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much for the review and the typo catch! 8-)
