in waves of her flow
or she and her infinite emotions3 total reviews
Comment from Chocolate Chip
You have truly captured the sensual side within this piece. The visuals conjured up with the words you chose are terrific! I could honestly feel each emotion as it was being described. Thanks for allowing your audience a glimpse into the world you created with a pen & an unique perspective. Smiles ;) â?¡ CC
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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You have truly captured the sensual side within this piece. The visuals conjured up with the words you chose are terrific! I could honestly feel each emotion as it was being described. Thanks for allowing your audience a glimpse into the world you created with a pen & an unique perspective. Smiles ;) â?¡ CC
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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:) thank you. your ending is a bit more mysterious though...;)
Comment from Emily George
Delightful free flowing poem
Seductive and tender with a free verse reminiscent of the gypsy in your verse
Your picture is well chosen and conjures up images echoed in you use of words of the free spirited woman
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Delightful free flowing poem
Seductive and tender with a free verse reminiscent of the gypsy in your verse
Your picture is well chosen and conjures up images echoed in you use of words of the free spirited woman
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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thank's much you for your reflection.
Comment from country ranch writer
SHE SHOULD BE CAREFUL WHAT SHE DREAMS AND HER EMOTIONS THEY COULD BECOME INTERTWINED AND SHE MAY THROW CAUTION TO THE WIND SO SHE MUST BE CAREFUL.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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SHE SHOULD BE CAREFUL WHAT SHE DREAMS AND HER EMOTIONS THEY COULD BECOME INTERTWINED AND SHE MAY THROW CAUTION TO THE WIND SO SHE MUST BE CAREFUL.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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i think she's going to like you for your care. thank you.
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