Lord Krishna!
Lord Krishna outshines most of the immortal greats54 total reviews
Comment from Bryana
I love your poem, very nice rhyme, rhythm
and flow, of course I also like the theme
of the poem. I learned about the Krishna.
I had a class in history and very enjoyable.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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I love your poem, very nice rhyme, rhythm
and flow, of course I also like the theme
of the poem. I learned about the Krishna.
I had a class in history and very enjoyable.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Hello Friend,
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your so lovely, uplifting comments and Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from c_lucas
Sounds like something from the Four Gospels.and the Christ Child. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good reaad.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Sounds like something from the Four Gospels.and the Christ Child. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good reaad.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Hello Friend,
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
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You're welcome, RP. Charlie
Comment from DR DIP
really enjoyed this. a lesson in history as told in a story poem . I had no idea of this story of Krishna thanks for showing me some insight into his story
well done
dip
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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really enjoyed this. a lesson in history as told in a story poem . I had no idea of this story of Krishna thanks for showing me some insight into his story
well done
dip
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Hello Friend,
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi RP,
Nicely presented work, with an interesting story. Your choice of artwork tided in nicely with the poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Hi RP,
Nicely presented work, with an interesting story. Your choice of artwork tided in nicely with the poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Hello Jax,
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your so lovely, uplifting comments and Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from seaglass
This is very informative and educational facts concerning in Krishna Indian religious traditional beliefs. The rhyme and meter remain true through-out which can be challenging in an informative piece.
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This is very informative and educational facts concerning in Krishna Indian religious traditional beliefs. The rhyme and meter remain true through-out which can be challenging in an informative piece.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Hello Friend,
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from krys123
RPSaxena;
Technically you are rhyming and rhythm was done perfectly with tempo and meter correctly achieved. Your rhyming was neither forced nor labored well your rhythm flowed smoothly throughout your poem.
Your imagination in writing this biography was very creative and inventive while your imagery was very descriptive and expressive throughout.
Thank you for sharing and posting this for everyone to read and may all your endeavors be good ones. Also before I forget your picture complement your poem very well and good luck in the contest with this is an excellent entry list describes a good story within a poem.
Alex
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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RPSaxena;
Technically you are rhyming and rhythm was done perfectly with tempo and meter correctly achieved. Your rhyming was neither forced nor labored well your rhythm flowed smoothly throughout your poem.
Your imagination in writing this biography was very creative and inventive while your imagery was very descriptive and expressive throughout.
Thank you for sharing and posting this for everyone to read and may all your endeavors be good ones. Also before I forget your picture complement your poem very well and good luck in the contest with this is an excellent entry list describes a good story within a poem.
Alex
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Hello Alex,
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your so lovely, uplifting comments and Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
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You are so sincerely welcome my friend
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You are so sincerely welcome my friend
Comment from nomi338
It is always enjoyable to read a historical saga through poetry that rhymes. The story is interesting and stands on it's own. The fact that the story rhymes makes it all the more enjoyable. Very good work.
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It is always enjoyable to read a historical saga through poetry that rhymes. The story is interesting and stands on it's own. The fact that the story rhymes makes it all the more enjoyable. Very good work.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Hello Friend,
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Robin Gilmor
A delightful and interesting verse that include history and art that makes for
easy reading and comprehension. A nice flow of verse that leads the reading forward. Good visuals to compliment the verse. An enjoyable read though out.
Smiles to you. Robin :)
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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A delightful and interesting verse that include history and art that makes for
easy reading and comprehension. A nice flow of verse that leads the reading forward. Good visuals to compliment the verse. An enjoyable read though out.
Smiles to you. Robin :)
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Hello Friend,
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from rjuselius
this is an interesting and informative piece of poetic art! it demonstrates that you can learn more and more to years to become.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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this is an interesting and informative piece of poetic art! it demonstrates that you can learn more and more to years to become.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Hello Friend,
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your so lovely, uplifting comments and Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a very strong contest entry. Your story/poem is very good. The flow is excellent and the rhyming scheme if perfect. Good job and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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This is a very strong contest entry. Your story/poem is very good. The flow is excellent and the rhyming scheme if perfect. Good job and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Hello Friend,
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your so lovely, uplifting comments and Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
