Lord Krishna!
Lord Krishna outshines most of the immortal greats54 total reviews
Comment from mjac777
Nicely rhymed aabb poem on Lord Krishna.
It was an interesting historical piece and the rhythm made the piece flow.
I did have to look up "extirpated" lol
If only history could be taught in this format.
Thank you so much for sharing your knowledge with us!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Nicely rhymed aabb poem on Lord Krishna.
It was an interesting historical piece and the rhythm made the piece flow.
I did have to look up "extirpated" lol
If only history could be taught in this format.
Thank you so much for sharing your knowledge with us!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Hello Friend,
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from ujbhurtah
The way you described Lord krishna's life in the shape of such a beautiful poem is extraordinary. Having it translated in Sanskrit and making of it a beautiful chalisa or Bhajjan would be a good idea too. Great and inspirational job!
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The way you described Lord krishna's life in the shape of such a beautiful poem is extraordinary. Having it translated in Sanskrit and making of it a beautiful chalisa or Bhajjan would be a good idea too. Great and inspirational job!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Hello Ujbhurtah,
Wonderful review backed by SIX STARS!
I'm very glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting comments. Special/Extra Thanks for 5 + 1 Sparkling STAR.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Aplgwest
An informative poem about Krishna, though I would need a little more to understand better. For instance, when he was taken from the jail, was he still a baby? Isn't he often pictured as blue? Those questions do not take away from the worth of your poem, in fact your poem is an inspiration to learn more and an example of how little most of us know.--Elaine
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An informative poem about Krishna, though I would need a little more to understand better. For instance, when he was taken from the jail, was he still a baby? Isn't he often pictured as blue? Those questions do not take away from the worth of your poem, in fact your poem is an inspiration to learn more and an example of how little most of us know.--Elaine
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Hello Skylight,
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting comments.
In reply to your Questions: 1st,He was taken out of the jail 'the very night he was born'. It's implied. Please see the same stanza i.e. 5th stanza. 2nd, Yes, as blue - 'the pure color of a clear sky'.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from LIJ Red
Glanced at a copy of translated Bhagavad Gita, classed it with Koran and Book of Mormon and Book of the Dead and
Lost Books of Eden and moved on. Which has what to do with
your excellent story poem?
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Glanced at a copy of translated Bhagavad Gita, classed it with Koran and Book of Mormon and Book of the Dead and
Lost Books of Eden and moved on. Which has what to do with
your excellent story poem?
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Hello Friend,
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your lovely and uplifting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Louise Michelle
This is so interesting! You told this story so well in the poem format, with excellent rhymes that are not forced at all. The aabb rhyme scheme is achieved beautifully, which is not always easy to do. Hugs, Lou
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This is so interesting! You told this story so well in the poem format, with excellent rhymes that are not forced at all. The aabb rhyme scheme is achieved beautifully, which is not always easy to do. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Hello Friend,
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from SilverWoulfCreations
Love reading poetry with stories that teach us something. Very enjoyable read. Well thought out, researched and delivered beautifully. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Love reading poetry with stories that teach us something. Very enjoyable read. Well thought out, researched and delivered beautifully. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Hello Friend,
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Ekim777
Our poet seems to relish his rhymes and presents them with aplomb though sometimes at the expense of the cadence. The poet sketches a legendary figure who lived a heroic life. I'm not sure what his message is though he promises us the taste of bliss. If our suffering is due to our flaws and shortcomings, Lord Krishna is a shining example of human perfection. I think he saw life as a meditation. -Ekim777
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Our poet seems to relish his rhymes and presents them with aplomb though sometimes at the expense of the cadence. The poet sketches a legendary figure who lived a heroic life. I'm not sure what his message is though he promises us the taste of bliss. If our suffering is due to our flaws and shortcomings, Lord Krishna is a shining example of human perfection. I think he saw life as a meditation. -Ekim777
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Hello Friend,
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your lovely and uplifting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from GWinterwin
Good poem with a good picture, and also a good message about this great Lord. Good word flow and rhyming as you tell his story.
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Good poem with a good picture, and also a good message about this great Lord. Good word flow and rhyming as you tell his story.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Hello Friend,
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
You presented your interesting poem nicely with appropriate artwork. It was educational, though I couldn't answer an exam question on it! It is always interesting to learn something new about these gentle people, and I wish you good luck in the competition, Giddy
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You presented your interesting poem nicely with appropriate artwork. It was educational, though I couldn't answer an exam question on it! It is always interesting to learn something new about these gentle people, and I wish you good luck in the competition, Giddy
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Hello Friend,
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your so lovely, uplifting comments and Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Irish Rain
Extremely informative, I knew nothing about Krishna, I respect all religions, and totally enjoy the writings that teach me of others, great 'Story in a Poem'! Blessings...Judy
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Extremely informative, I knew nothing about Krishna, I respect all religions, and totally enjoy the writings that teach me of others, great 'Story in a Poem'! Blessings...Judy
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Hello Friend,
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
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you are welcome!
