Lord Krishna!
Lord Krishna outshines most of the immortal greats54 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for the additional notes and the reinforcing artwork. I enjoyed your recounting the story of Krishna in these rhymed couplets in quatrains. Here's to blissful life and best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Thank you for the additional notes and the reinforcing artwork. I enjoyed your recounting the story of Krishna in these rhymed couplets in quatrains. Here's to blissful life and best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 16-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Hello Joan E,
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your so lovely words and best wishes.
~RP.
Comment from Sanku
Thank you for writing the story of Krishna ,.I am a devotee of krishna and look up to him everytime i face tough times .now that janmashtami is approaching it is ideal that you wrote this. good solid rhymes and beautifully flowing lines
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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Thank you for writing the story of Krishna ,.I am a devotee of krishna and look up to him everytime i face tough times .now that janmashtami is approaching it is ideal that you wrote this. good solid rhymes and beautifully flowing lines
Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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Hello Sanku,
I felt such a natural intimacy with you while reading your heart touching words that I can't express in words. Really wonderful review!
Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting comments. Special/Extra Thanks for 5 + 1 Sparkling STAR!
Have a pleasant time!
`RP.
Comment from Genya
This was really well written and a very good read. I have to admit l read it several times as l really wanted to learn more about Lord Krishna. I have visited India and seen some amazing places and shrines but l have to admit l knew very little about Lord Krishna. Very informative as well as being a beautiful poem to read. Loved the story. Genya
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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This was really well written and a very good read. I have to admit l read it several times as l really wanted to learn more about Lord Krishna. I have visited India and seen some amazing places and shrines but l have to admit l knew very little about Lord Krishna. Very informative as well as being a beautiful poem to read. Loved the story. Genya
Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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Hello Genya,
I am glad you enjoyed it so much. Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from scd41
I was pleasantly surprised to find your poem in the form of a story on Lord Krishna as an entry for the contest. Coming just a few days ahead of Krishna's birthday, the poem is surely going to usher in the celebratory mood among his devotees. Volumes have been written throughout ages about Krishna; His preachings full of morals and wisdom are read and heard by millions everyday. You have done a wonderful job in venturing to give a glimpse of them in your poem. Best of luck!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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I was pleasantly surprised to find your poem in the form of a story on Lord Krishna as an entry for the contest. Coming just a few days ahead of Krishna's birthday, the poem is surely going to usher in the celebratory mood among his devotees. Volumes have been written throughout ages about Krishna; His preachings full of morals and wisdom are read and heard by millions everyday. You have done a wonderful job in venturing to give a glimpse of them in your poem. Best of luck!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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Hello Scd41,
I felt such a natural intimacy with you while reading your heart touching words that I can't express in words. Really wonderful review!
I am glad you enjoyed it so much. Thank you very much for your so lovely, uplifting comments and Best Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from ravenblack
I have read the Bhagavad Ghita and it is a truly beautiful, spiritual book. I am not to familiar with the story of Krishna and you have told it well in verse. Just one question- is Kans a variation of Khans?
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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I have read the Bhagavad Ghita and it is a truly beautiful, spiritual book. I am not to familiar with the story of Krishna and you have told it well in verse. Just one question- is Kans a variation of Khans?
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Hello Ravenblack,
In spite of being quite unfamiliar with the theme/Krishna's story, you have taken so much interest in reading and reviewing it. I thank you very much for its appreciation and Excellent Rating.
Dear Friend, 'Kans' is the name of Lord Krishna's maternal uncle who was very cruel king of then Mathura kingdom.
Khans/Islam or Muslim religion didn't exist at all at that time.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Karen B.
Very well written and contains so much historically interesting information about Krishna. The notes add a lot to the understanding of it for me since I'm not at all familiar with the subject. Excellent rhyming and flows well from start to finish. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Very well written and contains so much historically interesting information about Krishna. The notes add a lot to the understanding of it for me since I'm not at all familiar with the subject. Excellent rhyming and flows well from start to finish. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Hello Friend,
In spite of being quite unfamiliar with the theme/Krishna's story, you have taken so much interest in reading and reviewing it. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely, uplifting comments and Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Sonaleeka
Very tough for me to right this kind of great poem.You did a awesome job buddy.I loved the poem and enjoyed too.Best of luck.
God bless!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Very tough for me to right this kind of great poem.You did a awesome job buddy.I loved the poem and enjoyed too.Best of luck.
God bless!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Hello Friend,
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your so lovely, uplifting comments and Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from TamzinWhite
I really love being taught history in verse. I love the way the poem starts out clear as day, vibrant and fun to read. It stays that way except for me, I find it hard to follow in the second half of the poem. Some of it fits beautiful in verse but because I do not know the story, I am left disappointed that it is not spelled out as clearly as the first half. You might say look it up, and I'm sure I should. Still a great poem.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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I really love being taught history in verse. I love the way the poem starts out clear as day, vibrant and fun to read. It stays that way except for me, I find it hard to follow in the second half of the poem. Some of it fits beautiful in verse but because I do not know the story, I am left disappointed that it is not spelled out as clearly as the first half. You might say look it up, and I'm sure I should. Still a great poem.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Hello Friend,
In spite of being quite unfamiliar with the theme/Krishna's story, you have taken so much interest in reading and reviewing it.
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Alan K Pease
I spent two years working on a research ship out of Bombay (note Mira mar). I really appreciated the diversity of cultures and their mythologies/religions characterized by their temples and written culture -a lot of what was appreciated at the time including the dualities of the principle characters some of which have past on from my memories unfortunately. The same diversity of culture was noted in on a side trip to Nepal. I passed though the ceremony of colored water with only a masking of face or was it fate.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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I spent two years working on a research ship out of Bombay (note Mira mar). I really appreciated the diversity of cultures and their mythologies/religions characterized by their temples and written culture -a lot of what was appreciated at the time including the dualities of the principle characters some of which have past on from my memories unfortunately. The same diversity of culture was noted in on a side trip to Nepal. I passed though the ceremony of colored water with only a masking of face or was it fate.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Hello Friend,
Thank you very much for letting me know about your past experiences and Excellent Rating.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from amahra
I had never heard of Krishna before. Your poem was not only beautiful and well crafted, by it gave a great history lesson as well. This is a fine entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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I had never heard of Krishna before. Your poem was not only beautiful and well crafted, by it gave a great history lesson as well. This is a fine entry for the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Hello Friend,
In spite of being quite unfamiliar with the theme/Krishna's story, you have taken so much interest in reading and reviewing it. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely, uplifting comments and Good Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
