Breezes part 2
Wind beneath my wings.81 total reviews
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
A very nice poem with a peaceful, calming quality to it. I liked your choice of artwork as well. It complements your poem nicely.
4th line .... comma between swing and bring ?
swing, bring
Fave line ... "will you howl, or gently blow".
Connie
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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A very nice poem with a peaceful, calming quality to it. I liked your choice of artwork as well. It complements your poem nicely.
4th line .... comma between swing and bring ?
swing, bring
Fave line ... "will you howl, or gently blow".
Connie
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Thank you Connie, I'll have a look, and thanks for the wonderful comments and review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Alan K Pease
You have penned these verses well to fit the parables of John 20:22, John 3:8 and Ezkiel 37:9 lovely song in their and your verses.
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You have penned these verses well to fit the parables of John 20:22, John 3:8 and Ezkiel 37:9 lovely song in their and your verses.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Thank you Alan for these most prized comments and review, blessings, Review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from nomi338
Respect the wind for the wind brings life. The winds bring warfare as well as love. Winds shift and change, it causes minds and opinions to shift and change. It can aid in growth or participate in destruction. Whatever the case the wind is essential to life.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Respect the wind for the wind brings life. The winds bring warfare as well as love. Winds shift and change, it causes minds and opinions to shift and change. It can aid in growth or participate in destruction. Whatever the case the wind is essential to life.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Than for this wonderful review and comment sum blessings, Roy
Comment from Tina McKala
good poem/song and your passion and belief come across loud and clear even without the author notes. well written, with good chorus and powerful images.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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good poem/song and your passion and belief come across loud and clear even without the author notes. well written, with good chorus and powerful images.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Thank for these kind words and great review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from flamingstar
Ahhh, reading good rhyme is like gliding along on a newly paved road with no potholes! You sink into the rhythm and it's so soothing. It was a great way to start me day!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Ahhh, reading good rhyme is like gliding along on a newly paved road with no potholes! You sink into the rhythm and it's so soothing. It was a great way to start me day!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much for this great review and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from abbasjoy
This is a beautiful poem/song about the breath of God that creates and moves things . We see their effects, like the wind, but really don't know how they came into being. The effects of the waves, but what actually creates them.
It reminds me of the book of Job, after the man Job complained and God's response to him was...Did you know when such and such occurred? There were a bunch of " Did you knows"...and Job had to confess he knew nothing.
I love this message.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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This is a beautiful poem/song about the breath of God that creates and moves things . We see their effects, like the wind, but really don't know how they came into being. The effects of the waves, but what actually creates them.
It reminds me of the book of Job, after the man Job complained and God's response to him was...Did you know when such and such occurred? There were a bunch of " Did you knows"...and Job had to confess he knew nothing.
I love this message.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much for these wise words and great review, the book of job is such a good example of troubles being a stepping stone stone to endurance,o blessings, Roy.
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My pleasure. Yes, the book of Job surely is one of endurance through trials.
Comment from Andrewajgblue
This is a really well written and the flow was so smooth, it had a natural beat when it was read out loud, and it was a very inspiring song, well done,
Andrew
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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This is a really well written and the flow was so smooth, it had a natural beat when it was read out loud, and it was a very inspiring song, well done,
Andrew
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Thank you Andrew, for your most inspiring review and comments, Roy.
Comment from SilverWoulfCreations
I will have to look for part one since I definitely enjoyed part two. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have to love how God works. Thanks for sharing with us.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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I will have to look for part one since I definitely enjoyed part two. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have to love how God works. Thanks for sharing with us.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Thank,you so much for the great review and stars, blessings Roy,
Comment from c_lucas
In the Christian religion the Holy Spirit is often described as the Sacred Wind. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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In the Christian religion the Holy Spirit is often described as the Sacred Wind. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Thank you Charlie for the beaut review and comments, blessings, Roy.
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You're welcome, Roy. Charlie
Comment from Kenneth Schaal
You've breathed a new life into the little wind, but shown us the true origins of that life. The parallel of the rose is genius, and says it all. I enjoy the descriptions, and the Psalm like quality of the verse. A prayer. Kenny
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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You've breathed a new life into the little wind, but shown us the true origins of that life. The parallel of the rose is genius, and says it all. I enjoy the descriptions, and the Psalm like quality of the verse. A prayer. Kenny
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Thank you for this really good review and and great remarks, blessings, Roy.
