Ah, To Be Twenty-One Again!
Poetic Snippet112 total reviews
Comment from Eric1
This is a great poetical snippet moonwillow, and so so true, my own life seems to be whooshing past since I hit 21, the age I got married as well, love this!
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This is a great poetical snippet moonwillow, and so so true, my own life seems to be whooshing past since I hit 21, the age I got married as well, love this!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
Comment from NurseBarb
Five stars due to full agreement with your statement. We didn't care about growing old at 21, cause we were 21!!! Old age seemed so far away. Wish the years would slow down. It's amazing.
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Five stars due to full agreement with your statement. We didn't care about growing old at 21, cause we were 21!!! Old age seemed so far away. Wish the years would slow down. It's amazing.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Moonwillow - I have to give you a five star rating if for no other reason than I completely agree with the sentiment. I would love to be 21 again. Not that I would change anything - just like that bit more time on this blessed earth. Kind regards Dorothy
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Hi Moonwillow - I have to give you a five star rating if for no other reason than I completely agree with the sentiment. I would love to be 21 again. Not that I would change anything - just like that bit more time on this blessed earth. Kind regards Dorothy
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
Comment from rrabinow
I enjoyed reading your poem. Great haiku. Great use of imagery in your poem. I like the flow of it. Great picture choice.
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I enjoyed reading your poem. Great haiku. Great use of imagery in your poem. I like the flow of it. Great picture choice.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
Comment from mermaids
Flies like the proverbial bat is a fitting last line and reflective of real life. Your words flow smoothly and all of us can relate to the quick passing of time. Excellent 5-7-5 form.
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Flies like the proverbial bat is a fitting last line and reflective of real life. Your words flow smoothly and all of us can relate to the quick passing of time. Excellent 5-7-5 form.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
Comment from Raphael Montonaro
Whack! a shot in the forehead with a wooden board always gets your attention, so does your 21st birthday! Nice turning line. Great job!
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Whack! a shot in the forehead with a wooden board always gets your attention, so does your 21st birthday! Nice turning line. Great job!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
Comment from Eternal Muse
lol. It was very funny. I liked the "proverbial bat". Twenty-one is a beautiful time in one's life, isn't it?
I called my whole crown of sonnets "When I was twenty-one".
I love the picture to along with your words, with all those beautiful watches.
A delightful offering, love, Y.
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lol. It was very funny. I liked the "proverbial bat". Twenty-one is a beautiful time in one's life, isn't it?
I called my whole crown of sonnets "When I was twenty-one".
I love the picture to along with your words, with all those beautiful watches.
A delightful offering, love, Y.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
Comment from Jackarrie
Time seems to drag
until we hit twenty-one... then
flies like the proverbial bat
So, so true time waits for nobody, but what can we do, only live in the moment.
Well done
Mary
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Time seems to drag
until we hit twenty-one... then
flies like the proverbial bat
So, so true time waits for nobody, but what can we do, only live in the moment.
Well done
Mary
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
Comment from pbroussard209
You are not kidding. Where does the time go, My oldest daughter just celebrated her seventeenth birthday. How and where did those years go. My time with her here at home is running out. I already miss her, even though she still has two years left of high school, I'm in panic mode, lol.
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You are not kidding. Where does the time go, My oldest daughter just celebrated her seventeenth birthday. How and where did those years go. My time with her here at home is running out. I already miss her, even though she still has two years left of high school, I'm in panic mode, lol.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
Comment from victor 66
Your descriptive and well structured poem, tells it like it is. I like to think that if you are satisfied with what you've done with your life, it's easier to deal with getting older. Either way, "time flies". Hope the trip is good for you. Best wishes.
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Your descriptive and well structured poem, tells it like it is. I like to think that if you are satisfied with what you've done with your life, it's easier to deal with getting older. Either way, "time flies". Hope the trip is good for you. Best wishes.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
