Ah, To Be Twenty-One Again!
Poetic Snippet112 total reviews
Comment from Just Pete
a well written and meaningful haiku. Its observation is a valid one. The years seem to accellerate as you get older and you find yourself wishing you could turn back the time. Well written - Pete
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a well written and meaningful haiku. Its observation is a valid one. The years seem to accellerate as you get older and you find yourself wishing you could turn back the time. Well written - Pete
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
Comment from Muffins
Reading this bring to life the realization that time is an equal opportunity rush job. For me, time took on a runner's pace when I hit my 40's. Looking back, I don't know where they went ,or what I did during that time. However, not everyone feel like that. For people who felt they had to hold on the rails after 21, this is the poem for them.
I appreciate a poem that doesn't requires 10 stanzas to make a point.
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Reading this bring to life the realization that time is an equal opportunity rush job. For me, time took on a runner's pace when I hit my 40's. Looking back, I don't know where they went ,or what I did during that time. However, not everyone feel like that. For people who felt they had to hold on the rails after 21, this is the poem for them.
I appreciate a poem that doesn't requires 10 stanzas to make a point.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
Comment from Sonaleeka
I love your piece along with art work.Both complimenting with each other.I enjoyed the poem.Glad got a chance to read.
God bless!
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I love your piece along with art work.Both complimenting with each other.I enjoyed the poem.Glad got a chance to read.
God bless!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
Comment from Pili Pubul
Very good and true message in few words, to me seem to fly
after I had children.... Don't think I will want to be twenty again
love my wisdom now better LOL . Pili
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Very good and true message in few words, to me seem to fly
after I had children.... Don't think I will want to be twenty again
love my wisdom now better LOL . Pili
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
Comment from Alan K Pease
Time seems to be your element and maybe the work of Salvador Dali ex avmurray. So true with childhood and as a young adult. It gets worse as you grow older with deadlines you set yourself occurring too soon. Good poem worthy of a contest.
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Time seems to be your element and maybe the work of Salvador Dali ex avmurray. So true with childhood and as a young adult. It gets worse as you grow older with deadlines you set yourself occurring too soon. Good poem worthy of a contest.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
Comment from Kingsland
I really didn't take note of times passing so quickly until I was in my forties. I guess it's different for some than others. I enjoyed reading this ultra short poetic format... John
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I really didn't take note of times passing so quickly until I was in my forties. I guess it's different for some than others. I enjoyed reading this ultra short poetic format... John
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
Comment from gypsycaravan
The message is, unfortunately, all too true. With all this wisdom I've obtained in my old age, I'll never have time to share it a lll. LOL Good job on the presentation of your comment.
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The message is, unfortunately, all too true. With all this wisdom I've obtained in my old age, I'll never have time to share it a lll. LOL Good job on the presentation of your comment.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
Comment from amahra
LOL! So true. It seems my birthday comes twice a year. As soon as I'm one age older, it's time for another birthday. I loved that darn art image, Gosh it's beautiful and so crystal clear, like I can reach in and pick up a watch. The background color is very suitable.
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LOL! So true. It seems my birthday comes twice a year. As soon as I'm one age older, it's time for another birthday. I loved that darn art image, Gosh it's beautiful and so crystal clear, like I can reach in and pick up a watch. The background color is very suitable.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
Comment from misscookie
You captured my attention from the start
I love the words to your poem I would not want to be that age for there are unpleasant memories for me at that age.
Thank you for sharing.
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You captured my attention from the start
I love the words to your poem I would not want to be that age for there are unpleasant memories for me at that age.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
Comment from emrpoems
expressed these thoughts today myself. Looks like yesterday I was eighteen and leaving school. i never like to think of it since it means that the end is drawing nearer and nearer.
Lovely snippet that says a lot
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expressed these thoughts today myself. Looks like yesterday I was eighteen and leaving school. i never like to think of it since it means that the end is drawing nearer and nearer.
Lovely snippet that says a lot
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
