Ah, To Be Twenty-One Again!
Poetic Snippet112 total reviews
Comment from Titan Black
That's real talk! Many teenagers always like to rush their lives along...thinking that they are missing something in adulthood. Nevertheless, when the clock becomes the enemy we start to wish that we can turn back the hands of time. Nicely put.
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That's real talk! Many teenagers always like to rush their lives along...thinking that they are missing something in adulthood. Nevertheless, when the clock becomes the enemy we start to wish that we can turn back the hands of time. Nicely put.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2014
Comment from TamzinWhite
Yep, true. That's how it feels. We all know that. I adore the picture you have linked with poem. Your heading gives the longing and takes the poem round in a circle. If only we could keep going round and back and do it again. Longing and humorous too, very well done.
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Yep, true. That's how it feels. We all know that. I adore the picture you have linked with poem. Your heading gives the longing and takes the poem round in a circle. If only we could keep going round and back and do it again. Longing and humorous too, very well done.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
Comment from Heidixoxo
Hello MoonWillow....
What a wonderful piece of poetry you have written and created. Wow....if only I could be 21 again is right lol. Very nicely written. I also think your artwork of choice is perfect for this. Thank you for sharing with us all. Job well doney friend....xoxo
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Hello MoonWillow....
What a wonderful piece of poetry you have written and created. Wow....if only I could be 21 again is right lol. Very nicely written. I also think your artwork of choice is perfect for this. Thank you for sharing with us all. Job well doney friend....xoxo
Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
What a true statement you have made in great poetic form.
And when sixty hits you.. it is more like flying into the sound barrier.. the sonic boom.. life passes so quickly..
Well done, Carolyn
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What a true statement you have made in great poetic form.
And when sixty hits you.. it is more like flying into the sound barrier.. the sonic boom.. life passes so quickly..
Well done, Carolyn
Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
Comment from mjac777
Very eloquent, snappy snippet.
Anyone over 25 can relate to this. I know I can.
I especially liked the artwork of the Daliesque timepieces. Perfect. Showcases the distortion of time.
Overall - it is an obviously well thought out piece in all areas.
Well done.
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Very eloquent, snappy snippet.
Anyone over 25 can relate to this. I know I can.
I especially liked the artwork of the Daliesque timepieces. Perfect. Showcases the distortion of time.
Overall - it is an obviously well thought out piece in all areas.
Well done.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
Comment from Irish Rain
The bat out of Hell...oh yes..I know it well...been too many years since I've seen twenty one...I think I was really dumb then, ha ha....loved your snippet, and the chosen artwork, perfect! Blessings..Judy
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The bat out of Hell...oh yes..I know it well...been too many years since I've seen twenty one...I think I was really dumb then, ha ha....loved your snippet, and the chosen artwork, perfect! Blessings..Judy
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
Comment from GWHARGIS
Each decade it seems to pick up speed. Great poem that holds true for every one. Nice picture with the clocks and watches. Very clever theme. Great emotional flow. Nicely done.
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Each decade it seems to pick up speed. Great poem that holds true for every one. Nice picture with the clocks and watches. Very clever theme. Great emotional flow. Nicely done.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
Comment from Victoria K
How very true. I think most of us (over the age of 21) would agree!
You have managed to relay your message succinctly, yet successfully.
The photo you have chosen further illustrates your theme.
Nicely done.
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How very true. I think most of us (over the age of 21) would agree!
You have managed to relay your message succinctly, yet successfully.
The photo you have chosen further illustrates your theme.
Nicely done.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
Comment from ravenblack
...And if I was still 21, it would be flying like a blind bat bouncing off cavern walls. I am glad I am not 21. 29 would be nice. But you are right. Past that point there is no time.
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...And if I was still 21, it would be flying like a blind bat bouncing off cavern walls. I am glad I am not 21. 29 would be nice. But you are right. Past that point there is no time.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
Comment from Aplgwest
The picture is striking, like that of Salvador Dali. I thought of "bat out of hell," when I read your last line. But, then how even after 21 our thoughts might still be upside and we might not see too well. --Elaine
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The picture is striking, like that of Salvador Dali. I thought of "bat out of hell," when I read your last line. But, then how even after 21 our thoughts might still be upside and we might not see too well. --Elaine
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
